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Night of Friday Blaze

Updated on August 7, 2011


She wears halter top, on a night of Friday blaze

Up on the porch, under the moonlit evening

The stars are flickering, I see the lights in bokeh

I’m coming closer

But love to relish the moment - her standing there

Her dark hair dancing in the wind, kissing her shoulders,

later my skin…


I lost a breath, when she turned around

She could smell my perfume

And she waits no more


She wears halter top, but I’m wearing her now

Up on the porch, under the moonlit evening

The clock stopped ticking, I could feel us in duvet

I’m coming closer

But love to relish the moment - me standing there

My dark hair untangles in the wind, touching her face,

Kissing her skin…


She lost a breath, when I cried a sigh

I could smell her perfume

And it lingers on mine


She wears halter top, on a night of Friday blaze



Dedicated to my poetess, Cathy Nerujen <3

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Glad you loved this night of Friday Blaise lol

      Thanks Vinaya!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Intense passion in work! I just loved it!

      PS: Thanks for your wonderful comment on my rose wine hub.

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      I'm glad you loved it Max :)

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      So expressive and sensual, beautifully sweet!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Oh wow reallyyy? The picture is perfect I couldn't publish this until I found the perfect match to suit my poetry. Thank you Eman :)

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      The original Eman 5 years ago from london

      This is awesome for a moment i could picture myself in this . The picture you chose symbolizes the raw passion in this piece, Keep up the good work :)

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      thank you very much Kamalesh050 :) have a great day!

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Enjoyed reading the poem, its Excellent.

      Voted Up.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Yay! That would be awesome :)

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      OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

      Will do! I might make my own discs and such :) I'll let you know when it's finished

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      can't wait :) do some bokeh :)

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      OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

      Haha I have 1 on my first hub that I took a loooong time ago. Maybe I'll write a hub on concert photography soon and throw a bunch on it :)

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      thanks :) are your photo stuffs on your hubs? wow, now I wish the song inside your head come OutsideTheLines so I could hear them :D

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      OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

      I will definitely have to check out the latest one then and thank you :) it's named after the name for my photography stuffs. Hah thats funny you say that because the whole time I was reading them I constructed a song for them to go with in my head(I do this any time I read poetry. Weird musician habit kicking in I suppose). And not a problem :) I merely give credit where it is due and you definitely deserve it!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you so much OutsideTheLines (nice username) :) I'm wishing the lyrics would be sung LOL I got the photo from photobucket or Tumblr. I cant remember anymore. I was searching from flickr for photos that allow cc for commercial use but didn't find anything I fancy. So I searched for 'girl in a bokeh' and found it. Perfect for my piece. Damn I love the photo so much. Think I'm on a bokeh obsession too Hehe. My latest hub has a bit of bokeh in it, too.

      Thanks for the encouraging comments. :)

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      OutsideTheLines 5 years ago from Tulsa, OK

      I really love this! Very desciptive without being too wordy, but you retained great diction. I really like the photograph too! Dis you shoot it yourself? I've been going through a bokeh obsession as of late. Great job and continue to write wonderful things like this :)

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you so much Ubanic! :)

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      Sensual and passionate. Great work. Voted awesome and beautiful

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Oh wow, I'd give you Hugs-avalanche for that. :) Thank you Muf-Muf :) XO Cheers!

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      Cassandra Mantis 5 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      I snuck back for another read. Hah! :D This is one of your best poems Fehl. Cheers!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks for reading Baharlaghari :)

      Always happy to see you in my hubs Lionel :) Means a lot. Thank you and God bless always

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      lionel1 5 years ago

      Thank you very much for putting that together, it made my day. Thanks.

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      baharlaghari 5 years ago from Jamshoro Sindh

      very nice hub

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks a lot Movie Master :)

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Awesome writing, WOW, loved it!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      :) You're awesome Dim!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      On my way to Astra´s page now..........

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      The perfume..has something to do with Astra Nomik's poem Summer Night of Love. She inspires me so much and more and this one is all bout her. Glad you loved this, Dim. Please read Astra's coz it's so beautiful. Thank you so much for the amazing comment. :) XO

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      A classic from you, I feel.

      She could smell my perfume

      and she waits no more.

      Beautiful line in its simplicity.

      Take care x

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      oh wow, will do :)

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      Shoma Abhyankar 6 years ago

      hey,blaise25 me too posted apoem here on hubpages.would like your comments please at http://hubpages.com/@shomaabhyankar

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Cool! :)

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      moneycop 6 years ago from JABALPUR

      that's so nice of u i will surely read all of them

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Poetry is a special piece of my heart.. without it, I'm not me. Thanks so much for liking my work. Hope you read my other stuffs and my friends' poems, too. I recommend all the poets who commented here. They'd make you fall, too :)

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      moneycop 6 years ago from JABALPUR

      I AM REALLY A FAN OF POETRY AND IF ITS LIKE THIS, ROMANTIC I JUST FALL AGAIN TO MY LOVE...GREAT POEM BUDDY

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      I'm just 2 years old here LOL This is a cool place. Shoma, you should join :) Your amazing writings can be read by fellow poets and writers ;) Everything is easy, the Learning Center will guide you.

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      Shoma Abhyankar 6 years ago

      i am relatively new to hub pages yet.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      LOL Acaetnna you always amaze me! :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow - Mama Mia!

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Ok mwaaah Mik! :)

      Shoma hey! Yup, I read a few. Will be reading more soon. You write so well. Keep ‘em coming. :) Do you have Hubpages account?

      Hi Peach Muff! Wow thanks that’s a great compliment. Hmm Bokeh (according to me) is the magical effect of a blurred part of a photo or a painting or just any picture when you focus on a thing. It’s that pretty effect of lights resulted from a focus shot or a focus look..take that photo from my hub as an example, the lights behind the girl are in bokeh effect. Damn I love that pic! When I look at it, the girl is like moving and coming closer to me. ;D And yea this is for her (smiling like crazy now) Yup, call this as a bokeh of her latest poem. :) She fires me up to write and more…This is kind of a song and I wish I had that talent to strum a guitar or something to make it a real one. But then I strum something else LOL Kinky? Glad you loved this. :) XO

      Entrancing and lovely, I love those! Thanks Heartyfly! So glad to receive amazing comments from an amazing writer like you. :)

      Hi, babylove! mmMmhhh… ^,^

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I want a night of blaze every night...heh.... ^_^

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      entrancing!! and lovely! A night of Friday Blaze is sure to set ones heart on fire.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      This is like a vignette from a movie, Fehl. You'll have to tell me what bokeh is, I don't know that word or place. Poetry made with love...there is no better kind of poetry, in my opinion. :)

      And since I know who this is for, I am smiling times two! :D And is there some parallel with her most recent poem she wrote...echoes of perfume in this too? This is sexy! So kinky! Love your writing, Fehl! It's always a revelation. :)

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      shoma 6 years ago

      you read my posts? thanks.i have started following your other works too

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      What Astra said - Mwaaaaaah.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Pretty name and pretty website. :) Hope you read my other poems and creative writings. Bless ya Shoma!

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      Shoma Abhyankar 6 years ago

      well, my name is shoma and abhyankar is my surname post marriage.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Happy you love it, babe. You inspire me so much. I love it when you’re speechless like that :) Mwaahh! Love you, too.

      Hi Shomaabhyankar! Interesting username. Thank you for the lovely comment and for reading. :)

      Hello Prof. A! Thank you. I love your messages in my hubs :) You’re awesome!

      Hi Ashh! Oh my yeah..I’m blazing these days lol It’s amazing to know it drags the readers in :) Thanks muchness!

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      KryptoGirl 6 years ago from Redding

      This made me hott not gonna lie but the way you write it drags you in love it!!!!!!!!!!!

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      An intimate expression that I felt palpable Fehl.;)

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      shomaabhyankar 6 years ago from India

      beautiful poem and it so vividly paints a picture in mind.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Fehl, this is totally beautiful. I am speechless... You are just amazing to me .... I love this so much...

      I love you so much. Mwaaaaaah.