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Updated on March 5, 2012

I wanted to write a poem with the end words that do not rhyme, but flow the word play. Another little way to say free rhyme and word play can show the way.

MY TORTURED MIND

What are my options do I know ?

If you were in my position,

could you show me the way out of here

or there would you leave me hanging, Dear

friend of mine. whom I trust

and now I need.... friends are a must



What is this riddle, with No Solution

in my sight ... if

in my words you see the fright



It's because I searched

with all my might... for an answer to this

what was it I wanted,.. only bliss or words

of love or words of praise

words for my heart, in order to raise my self

esteem, my ego high .. No,

that can't be the reason why.



No Solution can I find in words

that will relieve my tortured mind.






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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Michael, it's interesting, even without the end words not rhyming it reads quite well.

      This is a great riddle poem!

      Seems like there is no solution to your problem.

      Your writing is maturing with every single day.

      Believe me you are here for a long stay and play :-)

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      sometimes there are just too many questions left unanswered. sometimes we've known the answer all along, it just wasnt the one we wanted so we deny it for as long as we can. good poem.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Katrine, my lovely, thank you for your support

      your logical comments always inspire me.

      @ nikki, my love. I have missed you, I know you have a life. Glad you like it.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I like it, the internal rhymes are different, but they reinforce the effect of the riddle. Voted up and interesting.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Blossom, thank you, I had fun writing this one, will try it again in the future.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      cleaner, I readily admit to having no talent regarding poetry. That no way negates my fondness for it or my admiration for anyone who can do what you do...excellent job of producing quality in a writing exercise.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      billy, thanks for your feedback. Poetry is just a way of writing a short story. you are very good at writing.

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