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Poem: Numb
I enter the parking lot
I sigh with dread
I slowly find the energy to go on
I open the door and start the walk
I numb my mind along the way
I wonder how long this will last
I dream of something better
I wonder what I've become
I leave the parking lot
I sigh with relief
I try to denumb my mind
I struggle to not let this define me
Comments
kea
this was nice. if only i can numb my mind anytime that i want to. but i can't. thanks for sharing this :D
Wow...this reminds me of a past marriage....thanks...I think? :)
cool writing!
- Author
@Cris A: Hola...thanks for the comments. Yeah, numbing the mind is hard, but, for me, essential, for mental stability!
@TC: Thanks for the comments!
I'm left wondering where this parking lot is... work, hospital, school? Very intriguing.
My mind is in a constant state of numbness.
Trust me, being numb all the time isn't all that great!
- Author
Thanks all for the comments...this is my first poem or whatever and I was nervous about even making it public!
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