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ODE TO b. Malin

Updated on January 23, 2011
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Clips in my Hair...

And Large Underwear.

With Cream upon my Face.

To make me BEAUTIFUL.

While Lover Man stares...


I know, I know, I look a disgrace.

He Loves Me, he Love Me.

I know that he does...

He loves the Results.

But doesn't really need to know,

How I got It all there.

I know, I know.

Lip Bleach on my Lip Hairs...

So we don't look like twins!

And Coloring my Hair,

Should it be done secretly?

Probably, Probably.

But in the End...

He Loves the Results.

He Loves Me, He Loves Me,

All through the Night...

And in the Morning, by the harsh daylight...

He tells me I'm BEAUTIFUL...

What a delight!


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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      I hear that Men who wear Cotton underwear are Good Lovers...that's my Lover Man! So Glad you Enjoyed my Older Poetry, A.A. It was so Tongue and Cheek, this Hub Poem!

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      Augustine A Zavala 6 years ago from Texas

      I hear that the large underwear you speak of is very comfortable and warm. And women are frisky when they're comfortable, so there. Awesome poem!

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Yeah, but you're prejudice, AMF..but thanks for coming by and enjoy!

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      AMF 7 years ago

      I love this poem! You really are a beauty...inside and out !

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Hey James, long time no see, always good, when you stop by, and thanks for enjoying.

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      James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

      I enjoyed reading your fine poetry. Thank you for sharing your creative gifts with us. Well done!

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Hi, N.E. Wright...So glad you enjoyed...So I'm going to be on your Face Book Page...ok...I'm humbled by this...seriously.

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      N.E. Wright 7 years ago from Bronx, NY

      Ohhhh, B. Malin, I love this poem.

      I voted straight across, and I am sharing it on my Face Book page.

      Thanks for sharing.

      Take Care,


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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Mmmm breakfastpop, how should I take that...In the best of Light, I hope! Ha, Ha!

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Thanks Colin, This is an extreme on the beauty ritual that women go through...and who do we do it for...hopefully ourselves! LOL.

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Thanks Cheryl, I believe you got what I was doing.

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Thanks Fiddleman...I was poking fun at the extreme women go through to be told..."you are beautiful to me".

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      breakfastpop 7 years ago

      You are a lucky woman!

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ...well my comment here is an ode to your beautiful thoughts - and your openness and honesty is always so charming ......

      and p.s. - even men have concerns - because I make Mortimer Snerd look like Tom Cruise - my female cat has to wear 'blinders' - lol lol

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      Cheryl Kapelner-Champ 7 years ago

      Very good in the free form style. Thank U* Barb, keep up the good*writing!

      Mother Lightning


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      Fiddleman 7 years ago

      Beauty is in the eye of the beholder or so... "they"... say but it's what inside that creates the real beauty. Even a little paint makes an old barn look great. Like Will I don't think you man is looking to trade anyway soon.

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      b. Malin 7 years ago

      Thank you WillStarr...I'm not sure how secure I am, but this was a fun piece for me to write... We all need to laugh at ourselves a little. Thanks for your wonderful comments.

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      WillStarr 7 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      I love people who are so secure in who they are that they can poke fun at themselves.

      And yes, I can assure you that he loves you. Who would not love such a lovable mind?

      I really like this one. Voted up and beautiful.