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Ode to Mantayupan Falls
Sheer Delight
Ode to Mantayupan Falls
Whistling sweet nothing to me
While caressing my entire psyche
Hovering into my being
As I close my eyes just sensing
Massaging my scalp
Whilst listening to the harp
You envelop me with tenderness
And I succumb to your closeness
As coldness seeps through my skin
Inching its way through my shin
What a wonderful experience
A way beyond my means
I want to remain there
And be engulfed with your care
Oh, Mantayupan a lovely sight
Being with you brings sheer delight…
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enjoy your trip Linda...actually the falls lost its water last week...because the resort owner wanted to develop the area...suddenly the water stopped flowing...when they stopped the development plan...the water returned...
I always enjoy visiting this hub and taking a virtual vacation to these falls. Thank you for the trip!
Happy Birthday to you Raci :)
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you should visit the place and let nature invigorate you...God bless and take care too...thank you for visiting...
Oh now you made me want to try this experience too :) Gosh have been so busy with work there had been no time to relax. The most I could do was walk on a patch of grass. Take care...
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Hello Nell!!!yeah, it's really a wonderful experience...thank you for sharing your time with me...have a great day!!!
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thank you mighty lord...i'm honored and mighty glad for your visit...have a great day!!!
This was so lovely, I stood under a waterfall one time in Greece and it was magical!
NaTURE at its best! What a wonderful Ode to Mantayupan! As always Raci can reach the boundaries of excellence!
LORD
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yes, Rosemay, a very therapeutic one as well...
This waterfall is breathtaking and to actually be under it must be an awesome experience.
Wonderful poem Raci.
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thank you Barry...have wonderful day...
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thank you snowdrops...have a pleasant day!!!
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yes xstatic...a delightful one indeed...have a great day!!!
What a lovely poem! The words flow effortlessly :)
Very beautiful!!!
Sounds like a delightful experience. This is a beautiful poem.
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yes, it is indeed beautiful Linda, yet it's more than a hundred feet deep...anyway there's a smaller one...wherein you stand underneath it...thank you for taking your time to visit...have a wonderful day...
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Hello Ruchira...i closed my eyes and let it's healing wonder touches me...
thanks for visiting...have a great day!!!
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yes Frank...it's really beautiful yet deadly...i almost got drowned the first time i went there...thanks for the inspiring comment...
Beautiful and inspiring...makes me want to stand under a waterfalls and escape reality for a little while:)
mother nature sure can tickle us in many ways. loved your poem, which had such vivid descriptions.
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Raci.. you form words perfectly that's what makes you an amazing writer :).. that waterfall is so breath-taking up and wonderful
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hello cebu...yes, it was my second visit...the first one i got almost drowned...but then and there i learned to let go...so God saved me...thank you for dropping by...
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hello again Jane...it is so wonderful for you to come by...and yes, that place reminds us what a wonderful place we are living...and nature is a gift to us...
Thank place is heaven :) Been there 3 times now and I would definitely go back.
Such a wonderful poem of adoration for a thing of natural beauty... almost sacred. :)
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yes it is Audrey, the water is so soothing...thank you for visiting...
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thank you shim for sharing the feeling...yes, it's quite relaxing...it's like being massaged in a spa...have a blessed day too...
Beautiful sense of assonance in this piece--it makes it feel as though the water is flowing!
I can feel the sensations as you run through them... I haven't stood under a waterfall in many years... I am too shy to do that, but your poem brought back those memories from my younger days. Have a blessed day!
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