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Oh Woman, What You Do to Me

Updated on May 2, 2012

Oh woman

what you do to me,

what you put me through.

I get lost in you,

turned around

inside your maze,

skipping along from phase to flaming phase.

You’re sitting on a treasure hill,

golden genitals, if you will.

You have to realize the power of your beauty,

you’re higher than men because men are nasty.

You’re curved like an hourglass,

just way more sexy,

a body like a godly sculpture,

only animate, you arrest me.

And what would you have me do to please you?

What star shall I fish from the sky?

How many times do I have to die

before you recognize

me?

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Well not all men are nasty, and not all females are clean though. Other then that I loved your poem here it was cool, and has a flair of creativity as well as signs of needing to feel powerful I guess.

      Nonetheless voted up on a bunch of levels. Smooth poem!

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      Thanks!

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      KevinMillican 5 years ago from Stilwell, OK

      nice.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      ethereal...nice one poet...

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Poet83

      Beautiful.

      "What star shall I fish from the sky?

      How many times do I have to die

      before you recognize

      me?"

      Show her this poem and she will recognize you. :)

      Voted up and beautiful

      Take Care

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      Kebennett1 5 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

      Very nice! Sexy poetry. Voted Up and beautiful!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      splendid sultry poem.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      What would a woman have you do to please her? Hm... whatever you do, it's how you make her feel that matters in the end. Any woman would welcome "appreciation, loving attention and being held in high esteem." Throw in some practical assistance with every day domestics and I think you'll be on the right track. Good write here. Cheers.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      excellent poem .. very sensual too and I love it

      voted up and sharing

      Debbie

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      slcockerham 5 years ago from Tallahassee, Florida

      Nice mildly sensual poem, keep up the fine work. Women can be hard to please, but that poem should please most!

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      Lol not at all. The beauty of a woman, though, is like no other in the world

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      Jenny Pugh 5 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA

      Hmmmm...womanizer? one who loves any woman?

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      shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

      I am sure you have please the woman with your words.. lovely. Have a blessed day!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      you are getting better! keep it up and you will see you will be as good as any. great effort