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On The Shelf (Tanka)

Updated on July 4, 2015

She’s left on the shelf,

Gathering dust and sharp looks

His return takes time

Time fleeting..running-hooves-like

Towards a deep pitch-dark night

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      whonunuwho 22 months ago from United States

      Deep hearted and soulful message, my friend. Well done. whonu

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      Tijani Achamlal 22 months ago from Morocco

      whonunuwho ,

      Thanks so much for the lovely comment.

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      Faith Reaper 22 months ago from southern USA

      Dear Tijani,

      Love this ...waiting can be torture for sure. You have expressed it so well.

      Up ++++ and away

      Peace and blessings always,

      Theresa

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      Tijani Achamlal 21 months ago from Morocco

      Yes my dear Theresa,

      Very true .I agree with that,Waiting is painful. Forgetting is also painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering as Paulo Coelho says.

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      Frank Atanacio 21 months ago from Shelton

      yeah.. your poetry still hits my pause button.. voted awesome

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      Tijani Achamlal 21 months ago from Morocco

      Thanks my dear friend,Frank..I am glad to hear that.

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