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On growing love!

Updated on March 31, 2016

Need you deflower

the blossoming love

in my desperate heart

with your offensive look,

my cold heart?

Defend I my status

with the love-borne heart of mine,

my life!

With an ounce of sympathy

water your looks of threat

towards my yearning eyes

withering a petal of hope

every moment of winking adoration!


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    • Rachel L Alba profile image

      Rachel L Alba 21 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      This poem is very deep; it makes you think.

      Blessings to you.

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      Audrey Howitt 23 months ago from California

      Beautiful classical feel to this! Well done!

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      Shaloo Walia 2 years ago from India

      Love has the power to make you so forlorn.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      uh Flo

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      Sounds very desperate!