One Ton Son
I hope you enjoy this poem.
Don't look back on yesterday
Don't dwell on what's to come
Remember now words we say
Keep this with you- forever and always
when remembering I'm your son
We had our ups and downs
You are most special mom
when you look at me it's beauty you see
Is that any reason to frown?
It was hard to raise me
Trust me I know
I've come a long way mom
You did a great job does it show?
You think you've done wrong,
you haven't, I've come along mom
And still glad to be your son
Still glad you were the one
As we both grow it gets harder
To say words we hold dear
So lets keep our hearts near
Always remember I love you
Keep this with you forever and always
When remembering I'm your son
Never stop believing mom
So encourage me to do the same
So thrilled to have lived under your wing
And to have came suddenly to a heart so warm
Remember, I'm strong and I've grown
Never again to do you wrong mom
As one we stand together I'm your.... Son
--I wrote this a long time ago (Aug 2006) and it's copyright as is all my writing I post here..
This obviously was for my mother cause when I was growing up I was a very, very bad & violent child. Always in and out of jail, drugs & alcohol and I just believed I knew what was best. I absolutely had to write this to let her know shes the best mother in the world and she did what she could. Finally I woke up........CHEERS..=)
© 2010 Dom Shadows
Comments
AUTHORThe situation shifts? How do you mean?
By the way- my email is down and i havent been on in a while.. aww you love me!!! =)
TRUSTER-->What do you mean... And thanks?
Interesting hubbers commenting ! LOL! Very interesting poem ! Thanks !
hmmmm........
the situation shifts with this new information
she feels something warm, a jump in her stomach, and a desire to push this gently but in truth
but should she?
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......................
- AUTHOR
wow everyone thank you..
-LOL- Pointers? Nah I don't really have any..
And to the question/s-- Yes I am single.. =)
heartfelt and nicely put, I agree with opaleyes simple is good here.
Dom, you always touch me but this time I almost had tears
Really loved it
The simplicity in it is what created the large size of it's impact
Can't wait for next one
I say your an amazing son
who keeps it fun
Paid his price
Which mom found nice
We all err to great degrees
But learn from within not who agrees
One Ton Son
You have won
While pride fills the heart of your mom
a kind that create tears of joy for her son
Well One Ton*
looks like your writing is attracting the women, email me some pointers will ya?
Great piece Dude
very special and heartfelt piece
thank you and like orchid I want to know too, are you singles?
I really think it;s special you shared this with everyone.
I am close with my mother also. Was not a very good child.
I really love your work
I just hope your single.
Your mom must be really proud
nice job dude
Remember, I'm strong- I've grown
Never again to do you wrong- mom
As one we stand together- I'm your.... Son
Dom, lump in throat
wanna have your ways to cope
For me momma was never well
yet still I put her through hell
Why is selfish not thinking
and Heroin, coke and drinking
I never meant to hurt my mom
I really thought I was better on the run
years of hell we share the same
Reflecting my choices I am to blame
Dom, my mom would still stand my side
holding hands with nothing to hide
But memories remain
I though no longer insane
This poem of yours Dom
touches deep in rhythm of a song
Thank you
beautiful poem in also t's truth
thank you for sharing that
kimberly
Kimberly
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