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One more Forever chapter 7

Updated on January 15, 2012

Rachel held her hands over her stomach as the fire came towards her. She wasn't sure how much Eli could hurt her and her baby girl. The fire ball hit her in the chest, knocking her backwards. She saw her fire strike Eli hard, tossing him outside the cabin. She closed the door quickly and turned to her mother.

"I am fine daughter, you need not worry for me. Protect that baby with all that you have. We can kill Eli but we must be smarter than he is. It isn't as much about brawn as it is brains. If we stay one step ahead of him, we can be ready for anything he tosses at us."

"Well, mother, he just tossed one hell of a fire-ball at me. How do I fight him and protect Karen at the same time?"

"With your mind, Rachel. He can not read your thoughts but... we can read his. You are the stronger in mind. Use your gift to find where he is and what he is planning."

Rachel closed her eyes and focused on Eli. She could see him brushing the flames from his body. She knew then that he could be burned. She saw him calling out to someone in the forest. He was coming back for her with friends. Five witches joined him as he neared the cabin. His hands were already filled with fire as were each of his witches hands. She listen as they spoke to him.

"It burns my hands, Eli. I can not hold this flame much longer."

"Azelda, you whine far too much. I know it burns, you idiot, it is fire!!!! None of the others complain."

"They are afraid of you."

"I guess you should have been more like them, then. You should have been afraid!"

Rachel watched him turn towards the witch. He thrust his hands forward as if he were handing off a ball. The flames that came from his hands were so hot they were blue. The fire struck Azelda in the face. She clawed at the fire, screaming, as her skin disintegrated. In an instant, Azelda's body was entirely consumed by the flames. Only ashes lay where a witch had once stood. Rachel cradled her belly and prepared for the very worst.

"I am coming for you, Sister and this time I will not be pushed outside!!!!"

"what do I do now, Mother? He is powerful."

"Absorb the elements around you, Rachel?"


"The cabin and the trees are your strength so use them. Set them on fire and use the powers of everything that is good."

As the front door opened and fire rushed inside, flames engulfed Rachel. She could see and feel herself burning but there was no pain. She saw her mother move in to the flames.

"What are you doing, Mother? Get out of here!!!!"

"Absorb me, Rachel... take what power I still have and use it, Now!!!"

Rachel breathed in the fire around her, feeling everything she saw. She watched as her mother was burned by the fire. She could feel her strength growing rapidly. "I love you, Rachel," were the last words Rachel heard from her mother.

"I love you too, Mother and thank you"

"Come on, witch, let's be done with this now!"

"Yes, Eli, let's." Rachel raised her hands in the air, opening them wide. She swirled them in circles and walked through the cabin. A fire-ball struck her in the stomach and she winced in pain. She could feel a change inside of her. "Damn you, Hell Spawn, if you harmed my baby, I will make you burn slow and painfully!!!'

The cabin was now consumed by the fire. The wood burned hot as the flames rose high into the sky. Fire-ball after fire-ball assaulted her body, each being totally received by her body. The heat caused her hair to move above her head and her body was now more fire than anything human.

"Come on, dear brother, come and get some of what I have!" Wind rose all around her as she tossed flames into the trees. "Forgive me, my loyal friends, but I have need of you today." The trees, as if they heard Rachel's words, bent in to the flames, allowing themselves to be fully devoured by them. Rachel walked towards Eli.

"You can not defeat me, Brother, for I have the powers of the cabin and trees and my mother with in me. You want what I have, Brother???? Here it is, all bundled up for you!" She felt another fire-ball strike her stomach, this one bringing with it severe pain. Rachel felt the burning inside of her. She fell to the floor, watching Eli move closer, like a hunter that had just shot a deer. The cabin was collapsing around her as she stood to face Eli. "Enough!!!!!," Rachel screamed out in pain as one last fire-ball struck her. "We are done here, Brother. I'll take your witches, if you don't mind." She pulled her hand back towards her and the witches felt themselves being pulled towards Rachel. Within seconds, they were gone, sucked inside of her being.

Rachel walked to where Eli stood. She reached out and hugged him to her. He struggled to free himself but her hold on him was more than he could fight. "This is where you die, dear brother."

Eli knew she had won the battle but not totally. He too had won a battle. "I will die here, sister, but I have taken from you something even more sacred than life. I have taken your Queen from you. Feel your stomach and you will know."

Rachel touched her belly and knew something had changed inside. She wasn't sure what but she knew that Karen was no longer with her. She squeezed Eli tighter and just as he was going to be absorbed, she pushed him to the ground.

"No-o-o-o-o-o, Witch, you are supposed to take me inside like the others! I will simply cease to exist if you do not! Damn you, Rachel."

"I want no part of you left, Eli. Today, I take from you your One more forever. Now go back to hell where you came from!" Rachel pushed the flames from her body and watched as Eli was incinerated. The flames died with him. Now, only Rachel stood amongst the smoldering forest.


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      Becky Katz 

      6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      I am sorry your mother was in the hospital. I hope she is better now. Prayers

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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Thnak you all for reading this. Yes, there is one more part. I will write it now. I am sorry for the delay between the ending. My mother was hospitalized and I was there with her and family. I do thank you for reading this and for the wonderful comment. Now, I will let you go read the final chapter. Always, Darrel

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      jami l. pereira 

      6 years ago

      Cool story ! your imagery is the bomb! I loved it ! and cant wait to read the next chapter , wait a minute... there is gonna be another chapter , right? im not even gonna think like that , hmmm... i voted up awesome, interesting,! have a wonderful afternoon!:)

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      Becky Katz 

      6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      Wonderful story. Now I am waiting for the conclusion. I know you have one more little surprise for us. You always do.

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      6 years ago

      Love it! Please tell me there is more! I am truly addicted.

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      Sunnie Day 

      6 years ago

      WOW! What a great exciting ending Darrel. You brought us full circle with much mystery and excitiment. Thanks for sharing your awesome story.



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