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One more Forever last chapter

Updated on January 17, 2012

Rachel stood staring down at what remained of Eli. She bent down to scoop the ashes in to a container she found. She smiled as she sealed the top.

"No worries, little brother, you wont go to waste.You will be my payment to a nasty demon that has my horse. You wanted one more forever and you can spend it where you belong. Share it with the foul creatures of hell."

The cabin still smoldered as Rachel walked around the forest. Trees that had once stood tall and green now lay on the ground or leaning against each other, dead or dieing. Rachel closed her eyes as she ran her fingers over a huge trunk that still burned slightly. She could feel the words coming from inside the tree.

"Do not cry for us, Rachel. In our death, new life will come forth. We will be re-born and the forest will continue to give to you and yours a hiding place from the evil that is always nearby."

"I need to go and save my father. I can use the embers from the fire and then, we will find another place to stay, away from cruel people that do not understand."

As she touched a cooled ember, she felt her mother's presence very strong. She looked around the debris and smiled as the image of her mother rose from the green branches on a live tree.

"I know you have many questions, Rachel. There was so much lost here this day. The Sun fills the forest with it's warmth and lights your way back to your father.

"I lost her, mother... I lost my baby." Rachel sobbed in to her hands as she felt the warmth of her mothers embrace.

"No, daughter, you did not lose her. The battle shifted time a bit and it was not Karen's time yet. You will have another daughter before Karen. She will be born of you and a mortal man. She and Karen will work together one day to rid the world of another dark witch. The cabin will rebuild itself and the forest will be stronger in it's rebirth. Go now to your father and make him well. I love you daughter and will always be here in the forest, should you ever need me."

Taking Jacob's horse, Rachel rode through the trees until she saw the demon. He blocked her only way out of the forest.

"So, you did live, did you, little witch?!?" He breathed in her fragrance and smiled. "You have gained in strength and I fear, a battle between you and I would only leave us both bleeding. What did you bring me to trade for your horse?"

"If I had the time, demon, I would fight you and win but, time I do not have. Here is a container with the soul of my evil brother inside. Take it and make him your slave. This will satisfy both you and I. Do with him whatever you desire... he is my gift to you."

The demon took the container from Rachel. He held it to his nostrils and breathed in. "Ahhhhhhh, so deliciously evil." He opened the container and Rachel saw the image of Eli appear. The demon grabbed him by the throat and held him to his face. "Struggle all you want, slave, it will do you no good. You are mine now, a gift from your sister. I will use you for my slave and my pleasures. Pain like I will inflict will be like none you have ever known."

"Enjoy him demon and dear brother... enjoy this forever from me." She took Lazareth and as she rode out of the forest, she could hear Eli's screams. She smiled and rode to the house.

Her father laid in the bed, exactly where she had left him. He smiled a gentle smile for her.

"I am going to lay these embers on your chest, Father. You will be well soon and then we need to go away from here. I will tell you all about the forest when you are well. Mothers says to tell you she loves you."


It had been a little over 2 years since Rachel had fought in the forest. She looked out the window of the cabin in the forest. Beauty surrounded her as she cradled her baby in her arms. Ellie was beautiful and looked like her father. She would have her mothers powers but not as strong as if she had been born to two with gifts. She thought seldom of Ellie's father, a man who thought to control Rachel's powers for his own use. Where she sent him, he would never return from.

Night-fall came and Rachel stoked the fire. Though the forest protected her, the chill in the late Autumn air still made her shiver. As she watched the flames grow, Rachel saw the image of something inside the flames. Tears filled her eyes as she watched the hand reach out to her.

"You are as beautiful as always, my darling. The little one looks like you."

"I thought you were gone forever, Jacob. How can you be here?"

"A gift from the forest and flames for what I gave that day. I can only be here for a short time."

"Then we are wasting precious time talking. We could be..." Rachel smiled an inviting smile, "making a Queen, my Love."

Pulling her in to the flames, her clothes burned away by the fire, Jacob smiled. He kissed her lips full and laid her down. "Then let us make One more Forever, now..."


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      Darrel Day 6 years ago from Iowa

      QudsiaP1, You always bring a smile to my face with your words. I thank you for taking the time to read this story. It is the prequel to The Forest Has Ears and the second in a series of 5. You will see more of Ellie and see Karen born and her children go on to learn of the Forest and its powers. I will be starting the next one very soon.

      Again, I thank you for reading this and for your kind comments. Always, Darrel

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      QudsiaP1 6 years ago

      Darrel, can I say that your story has me mesmerised?

      Such delicately you play perfectly with the sentiments of both the readers and characters placing perfectly what we wish to see and read. Beautifully done Darrel.

      Though you are right I felt like Ellie got no chance for her story to be told.

      Nevertheless, thank you for bringing back Jacob, even if ever so briefly.

      I would certainly raise my glass to one more forever!

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      Darrel Day 6 years ago from Iowa

      thank you for your time reading this. I greatly appreciate it.

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      Jackie Lynnley 6 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very good.

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      Becky Katz 6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      I would love one. Thank you for the offer.

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      Darrel Day 6 years ago from Iowa

      let me know Becky. I have some here at the house. ;)

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      Becky Katz 6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      I am looking forward to another and will have to get the book.

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      Darrel Day 6 years ago from Iowa

      Thank you becky for finishing. I realized that this story is a prequel to my already published and in print "The Forest Has Ears." It looks as if there may be one more in between to take it to that story which is about Karen and Ellie...

      Thank you King Maxler for reading and your comment. I greatly appreciate your words.

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      kingmaxler 6 years ago from Olympia, Washington USA

      Lovely story. thank you

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      Becky Katz 6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      Wow, I love this ending. I knew you would make things right. I had faith. Great story.