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One more Forever part 4

Updated on January 12, 2012

Rachel wondered what the woman's words meant. What was so evil outside that it could want her dead? She was only trying to save her father's life, not take over the world. There had to be something she was missing in the equation.

"You ask questions of yourself that must be answered, Rachel. Before you can save your father, you need to save yourself."

"Save myself from what? That is the only thing I want answered."

A glow came from the fireplace, unlike any Rachel had ever seen. The flames seem to leap out of the fire and touch her cheek, burning and yet not hurting her. She stepped away from the fire but they stretched out further to reach her.

"What the hell is going on?!?!?! Jacob, tell me what the ladies won't, please." She wrapped her arms around him and without thinking or knowing why, Rachel kissed his inviting lips. She held the kiss and felt him respond to her. He cupped his hand under her chin and kissed her once more. "Please Jacob, you will tell me, won't you?"

The witches moved close to them. They stared at Jacob with fear in their eyes. "You must be careful, Jacob, or you might be banished from the forest."

"Quiet, Lizabeth, I know what might happen but this young lady is walking blindly in to something that could kill her. Do you think that my being banished is worse than history being changed? I will tell her and I will chance losing the forest. She deserves to know and can not fight the evil if she doesn't understand what and why she is fighting it. Now hush and keep watch for intruders."

The witches moved back to the fire as Jacob sat Rachel near the window where the candle burned. He stared out the window as if he were looking for something. Apparently satisfied, he turned his attention towards Rachel. Taking her hand in his, he began to speak.

"You asked why the tree's bowed to you and I told you it was because you were a Queen. I wasn't sure how to answer you then and so I told you the first thing that came to my mind."

"So you lied to me to shut me up, is that it, Jacob?"

"If I am not allowed to finish this story, then I will not even start it. You must listen to me because your life and many other lives depend on what you do tonight and tomorrow."

Rachel sat back in her chair, pulling her hand from Jacob's. She would sit and listen but she would also be angry while she did.

"You are a princess in the world of witches. Your mother was our last Queen but you do not simply take her place. There is much more to the ritual than that. Before your mother was killed, she left..."

"Wait!!!! What do mean "Killed." My mother died while trying to give birth to a baby boy. They both died in the room she was giving birth in. I saw them carry the baby boy out side, saw his grave and my mother's. My father was away at the time so I took care of the arrangements. The mid-wife did everything she could to save my mother but she couldn't."

"Rachel, please listen to me. Those people that were at your house that day were not mid-wives. They were witches from a dark sect that needed your mom dead to move up in the ranks. The little baby boy was not dead. You buried an empty box. The witches took the boy and raised him up them-selves."

Rachel stood and began screaming. She pointed her finger at Jacob and suddenly a burst of energy came from her hand. The burst knocked Jacob in to the wall behind him. He fell to the ground, his shirt smoldering where the power had struck him.

"Oh my God, oh my God, Jacob... I am so sorry! I didn't know I could do that, I swear. you are just telling me things that can not be true!"

Jacob stood up as the witches surrounded him. They touched their hands to him and made the burn mark disappear. "I told you she was reckless and would harm someone!"

Jacob pushed Lizabeth's hand away and moved his face so near hers, her hair blew when he spoke. "Witch, I told you she would learn to control her powers but not unless she knew the truth. She is the only one that can insure us that her daughter will one day be Queen. Without her daughter, we will all perish. Sit down and loet me finish before it is too late!"

Without another word, Lizabeth and the other two witches sat down. Jacob hugged Rachel to him. "You did not hurt me, Rachel, but you could have. That burst outside of this cabin would have cooked a hole through my chest. Let us not point those hands at any of us, alright."

Rachel hugged him tight to her as she cried on his shoulder. She moved her mouth to his ear and whispered in to it. "Are you going to be the father of my baby girl? I hope that you are." She smiled as she pulled back to look at his face.

"Rachel, I will tell you all of it when we are finished with the battle. Right now, you need to know who you are. The baby boy is not a baby anymore. He is old enough and strong enough to fight any witches except you. He could single handed kill each of us. We need you to make sure that does not happen. What we do in the next two days will determine if any of us exist after that. Your brother, Eli, is coming here now. The Imps told him of your arrival in the forest. Your mother tried to shield you from their eyes but her powers are much less now that she has gone to another plaine. We will fight him together and hopefully, we will win. If he wins, history will be changed and the witches of your daughters generation will not exist. Your daughter, Karen, will save us all from another witch that wants to rule all covens. She would plunge the witches in to darkness and turn the world upside down."

Suddenly, a foul odor filled Rachel's nostrils. She covered her nose and looked around the room.

"What is it, Rachel?"

"Don't you smell it?!?!? It is like rancid meat or something. I can smell something burning too. It is making my stomach turn."

Jacob looked at the three witches and shook his head. "Stoke that fire high, witches. He can not be allowed to enter here before we have finished. The fire will hold him off for a time but we must do the incantations now."

"What, what are you talking about, Jacob? Who is here, Eli!?!?!?"

"Yes, Eli is what you smell. You smell the evil that is his to command. He can not hurt us while we are inside here. He will try but for now, let's get you ready to fight."

Just as Jacob moved towards the fire, the front door opened. A wind burst through the doorway and smothered the fire in the fireplace. A voice, evil, sounding older than time itself echoed inside the cabin.

"Hello, sister... it has been forever since I saw you. I can not decide whether to spend some time catching up on old times,"...

Rachel felt her breath being sucked out of her chest. She could feel the icy chill of her brother's touch. As if something hidden inside of her came to life, she lifted her palms to the doorway. Opening her arms wide, she shouted words she did not remember ever learning. "Let my passion for life act as a lever... take away this evil, give me One more forever!'

The door slammed shut and the flames in the fireplace re-ignited. She felt her breath return and warmth cover her body.

"Alrighty then," came a voice from outside, you are more powerful then I expected. I won't make that mistake again. I will be back, dear sister, and then... you can do me a favor and die."


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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      I think you will be glad that you did, Qudsia. thank you for your wonderful support.

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      6 years ago

      What a powerful story I must read the next chapter now!

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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Ahhh, my beautiful Michelle, how it warms my heart and soul to see you here. Words can not convey the smiles you give to me nor the way I feel when I see you. I can only say that you have brought so many rays of sunshine in to my world and I thank you for that. I hope you continue to enjoy and wonder if my books made it to your house. Hugsssss from my soul. Always I am, xxx Darrel

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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Becky, i hope it continues to make you feel what I am writing. That is what makes a writer smile. Always, Darrel

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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Thank you grammy for your kind words. I enjoy knowing that readers are enjoying what I put here. Again, thank you. Always, Darrel

    • Dday50627 profile imageAUTHOR

      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      Sunnie, once again, you make me smile. Thank you for always reading and for your encouraging words.

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      6 years ago

      captivating as always Darrel,i just went to read the next chapter and realized i was ahead of myself .so good to see you do what you are best at .

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      Becky Katz 

      6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      Wonderful imagery. I am chilled from the wind and sickened by the stench. I love your stories.

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      6 years ago from North Carolina

      This has got to be a regular for the project I am going to work on. Without a doubt this will pull them in. You are filled with these stories and we have to share them with everyone. Excellent, well done and very edge of the seat thrilling.

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      Sunnie Day 

      6 years ago

      Darrel this has me hooked and I cannot not wait until the next chapter..It is so cold here and I am sipping coffee, watching the fire, and reading your wonderful story. Her brother is very evil but I have a feeling she is going to be a fighter.

      Thanks for a great story.



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