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One more Forever part 6

Updated on January 14, 2012

Jacob slowly stood and faced the fire. The flames had died down and the only light in the cabin was given by the lightning that ripped through the sky. Trees were leaned over so far by the winds that their branches touched the forest floor. The smoke from the chimney swirled high in to the air, twisting and turning until it formed a face. Jacob watched as the image of Rachel's mother appeared. Her form complete, she descended to the ground and floated more than walked towards the cabin. Jacob reached to open the door but Alexis, passing through the door, was inside before he could open it. He stared at her, wondering how se had found the power to return.

"Jacob, you did nothing wrong." Her touched was a strange mix of icy cold and warmth. She brushed his cheek and smiled at him. "Wait for a moment and you will see."

"I don't know if we have a moment, Alexis. Eli will not grace us with time. He wants Rachel dead before Karen can be born."

"I have seen Eli and he is still trying to gather his people. You must now do your part, Jacob."

"What is my part? I thought that I had done all you asked of me."

"You must now enter the fire yourself. Rachel waits for you inside. You need to go to her and create."

"Create???? You think that I can simply go inside the fire and Rachel will open her arms to me as if we had been together forever?"

"Rachel has matured and changed inside. She knows what she must do to bring Karen to life. My grand-daughter will one day fight for what is rightfully hers. What you do today will give to you one more forever though your daughter."

"I am not coming back, am I Alexis?"

"Jacob, you knew when you went to her in the forest that it was a one way trip. You can step away if you want and no one will ever know the difference. Time will..."

"Yes, I know, time will go on ad all will be as it is except that Karen will never be born and the dark witches will win. I cannot allow that to happen, can I?"

Jacob turned away from Alexis as the fire suddenly burst into huge, powerful flames, flames that reached out and began to pull Jacob into thier heated embrace. Jacob could see Rachel standing inside the flames, her arms open, waiting for his touch. Her auburn hair looked like the fire itself and her emerald eyes sparkled with new life. He could see the strength within her and knew that what he was about to share would be more than perfect compensation for his life. He stopped just before entering the flames and looked back at Alexis.

"Does she know???"

"No, Jacob, She thinks this is the start of she and you sharing forever. She must'nt know."

Jacob turned back to the fire and walked inside the flames. Rachel stood before him, her body as he had seen it in the brook, perfect in every way. He took her in his arms and laid her down. Kissing her lips, Jacob felt the fullness of her being.

"I prayed you would come to me. As soon as I was consumed in the fire, I knew you would come to me. We will make our daughter today and she will be a Queen one day. This is for our life-time, Jacob. Make love to me so that we can be one."

"I do not need a life-time, Rachel, I just need one more forever. Today, I will have that."

Jacob slowly covered her body with kisses. He tasted the sweetness of her skin and felt her moving beneath him. Her hands urged him down until reached the very essence of her loving. From streams somewhere in their private world to mountain peaks, Rachel climbed higher and higher until she could take no more. Her sounds pushed Jacob to places he had never before been too with any one. Her fingertips were like fire and ice, burning his skin before cooling it and then cooling it again, like ice being poured over hot embers. Together, the found their own heaven on earth. The blood she drew from his back took Jacob to the very top of pleasures. He moved his body until he was looking into her eyes. His weight fully against her, he pressed his face to her ear. As he felt her body tense, he felt as if he were drunk from her touch. Fully intoxicated by her letting go, Jacob to melded one with her. Moving her beautiful hair from her ear, he whispered... "I love you, my Rachel, and I shall love you even after I am gone away. Such completeness I have never known. I will be watching you from the forest and will be only a call away."

Quietly, against Jacob's shoulder, Rachel cried. She realized what Jacob was saying to her. She clung tightly to his body, holding him with her legs. "Please, tell me there is another way. Tell me we can find a way for you stay with me, Jacob. I need you and I love you. Please, please, do not leave me alone. I am begging you."

Kissing her tenderly, brushing her cheek with his fingertips, he leaned forward and gently kissed her eyes. "I am not leaving you alone, my love. You will have a daughter now and she will be at your side. In her, you shall have me and through her... I have one more forever. I love you, Rachel, now and forever."

Rachel felt the weight of his body suddenly leave her body. She watched as Jacob faded out of sight. She reached out to try and hold him once more. Her hand passed through him and she sobbed. A voice echoed in the fire, a voice she knew brought with it death. She stood and placed her hand on he stomach.

"I will not let him harm you, my precious gift. We will destroy the evil abomination and then, you my little baby girl, will be a queen."


"Where is she, witch. I intend to kill her and all of her kin!!!"

Eli's hand,tight around Alexis' throat, she smiled at Eli. "You, my son, will be the one to die here. Rachel is already gathering her strength. It is more than enough to kill the likes of you."

"Oh Mother, how can you wish for something so horrible for your own son."

"You are Not my son. I only gave birth to you. I will see you die before you harm my daughter or my grand-daughter."

"Not from where I send you, Mother."

The flames flared in the fireplace. The heat was so intense, the hair on Eli's arms were seared off. Out of the fire, Rachel appeared. Her body glowed and the heat that was the fires, was now hers to command.

"Hello, Brother... did you come to leave threats or die? I am prepared to end your miserable existence today."

"Then let us not delay, dear Sister."

Both their bodies began to glow brighter. Fire-balls filled both of their palms. The cabin was engulfed in flames, forcing them to go out into the raging storm. Lightning lit the morning sky as the fire-balls flew from their hands towards each other.


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    • Dday50627 profile imageAUTHOR

      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      You are always so kind and I thank you for that, Paradise7. Thank you for reading this.

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      6 years ago from Upstate New York

      The pics alone are worth a visit!

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      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      QUDSIA...I never mind having my typos pointed out Thank you for taking the time to read this and for your wonderful comments. I think chapter 7 will captivate you. Thank you again. Always, Darrel

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      6 years ago

      Darrel, you had me in tears here. Ever so beautiful; though I wish not all stories required sacrifices. I would very much love to see Jacob back... Please please please?

      Darrel, I hope you don't mind but there are a few typos.

    • Dday50627 profile imageAUTHOR

      Darrel Day 

      6 years ago from Iowa

      And you, Becky, are an awesome reader that thrills me with your words. thank you from my heart. Always, Darrel

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      Becky Katz 

      6 years ago from Hereford, AZ

      Wow, he brought her back, but at what a cost. Now the fight begins. This is an awesome story.


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