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Last Time

Updated on January 22, 2014
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One

Last

Time

Keeps repeating in my head

One last time

Before i go to bed

One last time

Before all the thoughts are dead

Let the world shine again

No more dread

Please

One last time

Rhythmically

In my mind

One last time

On my dime

One last time

My heart will bleed

No more

One last time

It won't spill on the floor

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      Caroline Marie 

      5 years ago

      Thank you Jodah. :)

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      John Hansen 

      5 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Very interesting and catchy verse Caroline.. Also makes the reader 'think' to find the interpretation of what it may mean to them, and if that corresponds with you the writer's meaning. Voted up.

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      Caroline Marie 

      5 years ago

      Thank you everyone! I appreciate your comments and for reading my poetry. :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem and image.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely and enjoyed the creativity.

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      James W. Nelson 

      5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Beautiful poetry and pic, Caroline, as usual.

      I love your work!

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      Matthew I Crawford 

      5 years ago from Greeley, Colorado

      Simple and dark expression, could be referring to a myriad of different topics. Could be addiction, or a hurtful lover, very thougth provoking, voted up.

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      Demas W Jasper 

      5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      So nice, now that I am back regularly, to see that you are still dishing out good copy here in your Hubs. Well done, though I read it tinged with sadness. Here's hoping that life is once again glorious.

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      Your Cousins 

      5 years ago from Atlanta, GA

      Very mysterious and interesting piece, open to interpretation. I needed to read it "One Last Time," but then...I read it again and again. Very thought-provoking.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, This is deep and final. Abuse comes to mind with no more blood on the floor. Take care my friend......

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      Kathleen Cochran 

      5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      The power of a few, well-written words! This is a poem that will surely mean something different to every person who reads it. Plus the photo is a knock out.

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      Eric Dierker 

      5 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Don't know why but I could only think of my 3 year old wanting to get one more glass of milk after being put to bed.

      (I need to get out more around adults)

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      Romeos Quill 

      5 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      An intriguing verse; it reads as though the strong, deliberating person in the words has finally kicked procrastination into touch in regards to an overhanging decision which begged for conclusion. Peace will surely follow, when the sun shines again through the droplets from tears of finality, to create that much craved for, private rainbow.

      Thank you for sharing.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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