ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing»
  • Commercial & Creative Writing

My Onomatopoeia (on-o-mat-o-pe-a) Echomimetic Words that Imitate sound...like a Booming Voice

Updated on October 9, 2012
a widening, an opening, of expanses, to spread across the scene
a widening, an opening, of expanses, to spread across the scene
across the grassy fields
across the grassy fields
sensuous flower's perfume the yard
sensuous flower's perfume the yard
sun's searing light
sun's searing light
bubbling brook
bubbling brook
a barn's decaying wooden frame
a barn's decaying wooden frame
darkening clouds, pushed by stormy winds and lightning's flash, in thunders, loud.
darkening clouds, pushed by stormy winds and lightning's flash, in thunders, loud.
trees all stand guard, erect in their stances
trees all stand guard, erect in their stances

sounding words




The rasping file, the searing burn,

the soothing wind, our hearts to beat,

Words all spelled, each speaks, to yell,

to write or pen, as to talk, or to greet.




A bell that gongs, a kite's high flight,

a flapping flag, in darkening night,

A telling of language, as a sweet dessert,

or sour as lemons, as wings take flight.




The hiding clouds, amid a thundering refrain,

a flash of lightning, in the falling rain,

In forested woodlands, a bubbling brook,

as shadows are casts, in sun dappled terrain.




Broad widening of plains, across open expanses,

all visual sights, delights that sing, a melodious song,

Apparitions, ghostly, pale, in moon light's shadows,

filter through trees, as each stand, so strong.




Poetic rhyming, as bells, all chiming, signs to indicate,

Unexpected change, each season's guilt, to vindicate,

Winter Springs to Summer and then slips, in its Fall,

the fond anecdotes, the records, to all state.




The smiling faces, fond memories held, all to be embraced,

as Chantilly hearts laced, in figures, each they are to grace,

Each precious line, is so rare, in etched drawings of its space,

to give credence, of mind, a proof, to find, its on cherished place.






all rights reserved and copyrighted materials 2012

 a calming peace in airs so light, welcoming the curtain of night.
a calming peace in airs so light, welcoming the curtain of night.

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • whonunuwho profile image
      Author

      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thank you midget, I like to experiment with new concepts in poetry and enjoy it thoroughly.

    • midget38 profile image

      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      Each word deserves its own attention, space and together they weave such beautiful tapestry like this poem! Thanks for showing us the power of words and sound!! Sharing!

    • whonunuwho profile image
      Author

      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thank you for your sweet comments and fine replies, Faith Reaper.

    • Faith Reaper profile image

      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Hello Whonu, I love the name of this hub, as it caught my attention this late night. Plus it is excellent as to the anticipation of the resounding words - superb poetry and inimitable photos.

      Voted Way up God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

    • whonunuwho profile image
      Author

      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Vincent, thank you so very much for your fine assessment and showing appreciation for my work. These are what I strive for, in your motivating reply, after reading my work and this is well appreciated, Thanks again. Whonu.

    • profile image

      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      What a beautiful array of crafted words and meanings. Your pictures compliment each line so sublime. Words are like raindrops that once caught on the tongue will expand and lay upon a poets heart and soul and blast out in song. Your work here is full of imagery and I followed and enjoyed each line till the end. Bravo, well done my poet.

    • whonunuwho profile image
      Author

      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thank you for sharing in my hub, lovebuglena.

    • whonunuwho profile image
      Author

      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thanks Jackie, I hoped that I did not run people away by the strange name of my hub this time.

    • Jackie Lynnley profile image

      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I really like this! The photos too. Up and sharing.

    • lovebuglena profile image

      Lena Kovadlo 5 years ago from Staten Island, NY

      Interesting hub. Thanks for sharing.