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29 "Our Love Hand In Hand"-a poem

Updated on May 28, 2013
I will hold your hand forever.
I will hold your hand forever.

Another attempt at poetry.

Our Love Hand In Hand

Walking hand in hand with the one you love,

is a gift for you from God above.

That love will last you a lifetime,

loving that someone is no crime.

I want to walk hand in hand with you,

through life even after we say "I do".

You are my world and mean everything to me,

you take my hand, walk by my side and you will see.

I'll hold your hand as we walk under the moon,

I'll wait forever knowing we'll be together "soon".

Every night when alone I choose a star,

I hope you see the same from afar.

Together we will walk hand in hand,

some day you will wear my gold band.

To the one I love.

Greg


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      Susan Mills 6 years ago from Indiana

      This was very sweet! I loved the picture too!

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Sue, Thank you for the comment and encouragement. Greg

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      Kathy 6 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

      Just beautiful. Oh, to be loved in this way. A gift! Thank you. Awesome and Beautiful! You have a natural talent, gregas.

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Kathy, Thank you again. Greg

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      Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

      walking hand in had is so wonderful feeling very like your poetry.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi again Binaya, Thank you so much for the comment. Greg

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      Enjoyed this poem and the photo you chose to illustrate it. Yes, walking hand in hand with the one you love is a gift from God that's meant to be cherished.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Greg Schweizer 5 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi HB nurse, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Right now she is in Calif, and I am in Colo. so it is a little hard to walk hand in hand at this time. We settle for heart to heart walks for the time being. Again thank you, Greg

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      Akwasi 8 months ago

      I'm a poet and have been writing poetry for decades. I have a poetry ebook called The Words within the Words. However I never thought about writing a poem as a hub. I need two more hubs to be out of boot camp. Do you think if I write a hub on poetry it will pass the assessment.

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      Greg Schweizer 8 months ago from Corona, California.

      I am sure it would. I have been thinking of putting my poems and a couple of my stories and making a book. Any suggestions or recommendations where I could go or what I should do to do an e-book?

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