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Our Little Heaven

Updated on October 8, 2012
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Our little sacred place

A piece stored away

A secret playground

For us to play

Being with you here

Amongst the clouds

I sing to you

Across the heavens

We in our union

Shining brighter than

The stars

As we look into each other's


The sun and moon beam overhead

Laying a golden nest

Weaving it's tendrils

Among all the rest

Warmth fills me from all sides

A safe haven for us both

Our little corner

In this huge dark world

If only I could stay here

Just a little bit longer

With you

In heaven



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      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Thank you Cris :)

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      6 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Beautiful Carol. I love how the words flow in the reflection of a naive soul.

      Up and awesome!

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      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Thank you Curiad. :)

      Thank you Mc. :)

      Thank you Gypsy. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Such lovely words. Our skies just opened up and it's raining cats and dogs. Your words gave images of sunny skies.

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      6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      A pleasing paradise for two.

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      6 years ago

      Such a love feeling being in that place. It is easy to want to stay there and forget the world, but we must always return to save up for the next visit!

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      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Thank you CA. :)

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      6 years ago from Santa Clara

      How romantic!!

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      @ Hi Girishpuri thank you very much for the comment and read. :)

      @ Thank you Frank. I'm happy you liked it. :)

      @ Hi Xstatic thank you very much for the comment and read. :)

      @ Hi Whonu thank you for reading and your lovely comment. :)

      @ Hi Michael thank you for visiting and commenting. :)

      @ Hi Rob thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

      @ Hi Blossom LOL Yes there are. Thank you for stopping by. :)

      @ Hi Ruby thank you. :)

      @ Hi Thelyricwriter thank you for the sweet compliment and read. :)

      @ Hi Mhatter maybe there's some way. LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Beautiful. To be there forever... Is it even possible?

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful. Caroline, this was such a beautiful and touching poem. You are your special gift. Reminds me of "innocence" and "purity."

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Heavenly bliss..Beautiful Caroline..

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      6 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely poem. It would be lovely to stay there, but there are things that need to be done. Voted up.

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      6 years ago from Oviedo, FL

      Lovely. Great imagery.

      Well done,


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      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      beautiful Caroline , soft and smooth write.

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      6 years ago from United States

      Very beautiful and if we could only all stay in that part of heaven for just a little while, how grand it would be. Thanks for this emotional and beautiful work.

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      Jim Higgins 

      6 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Those precious moments in that groove of perfect contentment, yet haunted by the reality of our return to the mundane tasks. Life is a series of wonderful highs, a few (we hope) lows and it is that and the life in the middle ground that makes the highs so wonderful.

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      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      my goodness this was very good kind of sad too but I loved it :)

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      Girish puri 

      6 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Beautiful imagination, and a safe warm heavenly corner, a very small but beautiful wish, Amen.


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