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Our first time

Updated on May 29, 2014

My lovers eyes

We hooked; there I saw evolution from beginning to end. The dark ages to the new age. Where we dwell now.

I followed the time from his one temple to the other. Positive and negative space came together to meet in the middle. The place of zero. The place of new beginning.

It has no value. Cradling an open hole for our spirits to come and go. This place on his face was still.

He opened his eyes. I saw inside. That's where real time began..


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      ralwus 7 years ago

      'Cradling an open hole' say no more, that's reality and great prose. Woot!

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      Sunshyne1975 7 years ago from California, US

      I love it.

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      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Real time is Eternity. Loved it ! thanks ! :)

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      gramarye 7 years ago from Adelaide - Australia

      Very nice, short and sweet!

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      Very romantic.. It's beautiful.