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Outside Looking In

Updated on November 29, 2014

Looking on the inside standing back

It's hard to know sometimes when you are on the wrong path

The words are not in me

As I fear neither is love

Wondering where that part of me is now

The determination and will to succeed

After all that I have seen and been through

Bodies, Brothers, a flash of life in the corner of my eye

The one obstacle I can not traverse is a betrayal of the heart


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    • Sage Williams profile image

      Sage Williams 8 years ago

      My motto through my own recovery was always. If it feels like $hit you're on the right track.

      Writing is the best thing to do, your poems are truly expressive and so full of emotion. The road through healing can be long but so worth it int the end.

      Thanks so much for sharing,


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      Micky Dee 8 years ago

      Hang in there Bro. There's a light at the end of the tunnel. Of course it's a train but still....

      I linked your "gloves" up to my latest. Just pics really.

      I went to bed really depressed at the situation of the world and me. I awoke with 180 degrees in vision. It's a roller coaster. I don't want my world to be that way but the world is that way. You take care man.