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POETRY-PAST MISTAKES

Updated on September 30, 2011
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In the far vast distant light


I see the outline of a pair of wings


My surroundings are solid white


A feeling of comfort sets within me


I have never been here before


I have never felt so at peace


I sit with most eagerly eyes


My past is the past, that now means everything


Time has stopped yet for just a moment


As I wipe a tear falling from my eyes


Suddenly I catch a shade of blue


As I glance up into the sky


I feel a gentle breeze


I feel softness with my finger tips


I have never felt such sweet surrender


A feeling I have been destined to miss



As my vision begins to return


More and more sections of beauty I now see


I can't come to any conclusion


This magical event that has came over me


Yes this heart has felt hell and pain


Yes, these scars may never heal


I know I can't change my past


But I can the way I act and feel


Friend we all make mistakes


The pain only stays within the holder


I may be far in distance from perfect


But I'll be forgiven when it is all over


I firmly believe we get what we give


We can be forgiven no matter where we've been


I apologized and I learned how to forgive


I became a better person, lover, and friend


As I take one last glance back


This heart no longer wears a cast


Today is my new beginning


As I leave behind the ashes of my past

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    • Cagsil profile image

      Cagsil 

      6 years ago from USA or America

      Very nicely written Victoria. Voted up! :)

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      Victoria Lynn 

      6 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      "We can be forgiven no matter where we've been." Yes, thanks for the reminder. This is a wonderful poem.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Moonfroth, thanks for the input. Never thought about that. Every article that I have wrote in word, then pasted, always comes back as a duplicated article. I figured it was because I pasted it from word. No poems, just articles on such and such. I would be glad to read it and thanks for the advice.

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      Clark Cook 

      6 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

      Just a structural comment. I know HP makes it very difficult to type poems single-spaced, but as good as this poem is--I think its sense of aesthetic cohesion would improve, were it single-spaced. Sometimes you can type the piece in Word, then past it into a capsule in HP. It might be worth a try. . . . (and now for something completely different)-- I have a new poem on my site that I'd really like your fix on, if you have a minute.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Haikutwinkle, thank you so much. It means a lot. You are absolutely right, very well said. Scratch that, perfectly said:)

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      haikutwinkle 

      6 years ago

      You are a wonderful writer!

      The past may be clingy and needy but let the soul be strong and forgiving. To forgive oneself and others, release oneself from the clutches of negativity that follows like shadows. Let a light shine on those shadows, bringing validation and clarification to the present...

      Give a light and it will shine

      Present darkness and it will spread like fire

      Both energies are choices of commitment...

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Epi, your praise truly means a lot, especially from a talent as yourself. I am very humble and thank you for your kind words.

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      ..back to revisit a classic and one of my favorite pieces by any writer/poet in the past 2 years at the Hub - lake erie time ontario canada 9:19pm and sending you warm wishes and good energy

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      JP, thanks for taking the time to read this. I appreciate all your support. See you around and thanks again.

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      J.P. 

      6 years ago

      Beautiful as always , great job , I voted up and all the way , As always ...

      J.P.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Moonfroth, I stay so busy anymore. I get about an hour each day until the weekend. Still writing here my friend. How have you been? Hope you are well. Thanks for dropping by.

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      Clark Cook 

      6 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

      How've you been Lyre? --or have you been posting and somehow or other I missed out?

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Max, thanks for taking the time to read this poem. You are too kind my friend. Many thanks. Take care.

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh.My.God. This is just so beautiful and deep. Captivating, motivational and inspirational! Just wow, yeah, I am just speechless, it is very touching!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Moonfroth, thanks for taking the time to read this poem and comment. It is very much appreciated. You make a strong and powerful case of the message in this poem.

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      Clark Cook 

      6 years ago from Rural BC (Canada) & N of Puerto Vallarta (Mexico)

      We can all have, and share, opinions about how important, or not, this or that aspect of our being is to our perception of Self. But the one undebatable essence of who we all ARE, is our /continuity/ on this planet. Your poem captures that inevitability with sensitivity and grace. Thank you.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      u are very welcome!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      PDX, thanks my friend. I am thankful for your kind words.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      great work, writer, and powerful message!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      You are right Emma. So right:)

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      Emma Zimmer 

      6 years ago from USA

      And if there wasn't joy, the pain would feel normal.

      ~Emmy Zimmer

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      You are so right. That is true, so true. If it wasn't for the pain, the joy wouldn't feel so good.

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      Emma Zimmer 

      6 years ago from USA

      A true gift from God, indeed! But remember, with every goodness, there is badness. If there wasn't, we would be hideously perfect.

      ~Emmy Zimmer

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Nikki. Thanks for coming by again. I am a firm believer on making mistakes. We make them so we learn from them. Lord knows I have made enough of them. I appreciate your time Nikki. You are very thoughtful.

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      Nikki Wicked 

      6 years ago from Louisiana

      "As I take one last glance back

      This heart no longer wears a cast

      Today is my new beginning

      As I leave behind the ashes of my past"

      Well said/written lyric. I love this part. Yes we all make mistakes, and forgiveness is key. We all have the ability to change. mistakes and regrets are what make us who we are today. the learning blocks of life.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      I am flattered by the notion dear Emma and I promise as soon as I do, I will. I am purchasing the quipment and putting music to the songs very soon. I am hoping to be done by the new year, but it may be more like March. However, anything I get before then, you have first dibs. Thanks for all your faith. I really believe I can make it. It is what I do best and it was a gift from God. That has to mean something.

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      Emma Zimmer 

      6 years ago from USA

      i would be honored if you would try to sing one of my songs. please please just try to sing one of them, and maybe if you like the sound of it, you could email me you singing it, or something.

      ~Emmy Zimmer

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Epigramman. My friend I am honored. I sure do appreciate you coming by and your time dear friend. You have always been very thoughtful and the funniest person I know. Love your poetry. Take care.

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      ..well I am back to revisit a classic as I totally surrended myself to these sacred words once again - and with the purpose of pride and honor to post this remarkable piece of writing to my FACEBOOK page with a direct link back here.

      lake erie time ontario canada 12:29pm

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Emma, I do. Mostly country and some soft rock. I have completed over 300 songs and I am waiting for the beginning of the year to but some equipment so I can post it on youtube. Music is my real passion and I want to help others with my music. I know poetry follows those guidelines, but music is so much more powerful. I am a better lyricist then singer, but I believe with practice, I could be really good. I sing better when other people are around then being by myself. Don't know why. I love singing though. I truthfully believe I could make it. If I ever get my finances straight and a vehicle, I am going to try out for Nashville Star. Big maybe though cause there is not much money to play with. You never know though.

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      Emma Zimmer 

      6 years ago from USA

      Hey lyricwriter do you sing at all?

      ~Emmy Zimmer

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Minnetonka, thanks a lot for commenting. I appreciate your feedback. It is that power of letting go that does set us free, you are right. We have to come to conclusion that we can't change the past. It is what it is.

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      Linda Rogers 

      6 years ago from Minnesota

      What an inspirational poem LyricWriter. The message in it is important and can set us free so we can move on and live. Nice work :-)

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Hi again Dim. I am truly honored. It is such a joy when my words effects someone in a special way. I believe it is my purpose, my gift from God. I really do thank you for your time and comment, as well as the vote. I shall be by to visit and thanks. Have a good weekend.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      6 years ago from Great Britain

      Voted up. This was beautiful and so true, though not always easy,. Your poem has inspired me to try a little harder at forgiving and forgetting.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Frogyfish, hey there. Thanks for coming by. I liked the ending best also. The past is the past, nothing more, nothing less. I owe you my time. See ya soon.

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      frogyfish 

      6 years ago from Central United States of America

      What a poignant statement. Your words just flow... I really really liked your last three lines too. Right on!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Sligobay, I appreciate your sincere comment. It is great when someone truly understands it. It is all about how the reader takes it. It is whatever the reader understands it to be. Take care.

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      sligobay 

      6 years ago from east of the equator

      Its a heavenly hope to feel the softness and the release from remorse thelyricwriter. Our thoughts and words project us into the limitless. I'm following you now.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Hunbbel, thanks for coming by, for the comment and vote. I am glad you can relate and I hope it was in a positive way my friend.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 

      6 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      So profound and thought-provoking.

      I have seen many people dwell in the past. To be honest, I am on of those people to some extent. Anyway, very beautiful poem. Voted up!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Rosie. Thanks a lot. You are right. Learning from our mistakes is so important. Thanks for coming by and cheers to you.

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      Rosie Rose 

      6 years ago from Toronto, Canada

      Oh thelyricwriter, this poem is so touching and so real for most of us. You are so right that we all make mistakes. The trick is to allow ourselves to be human.. we are not perfect. Learn from our mistakes and move on.. tomorrow is another day. Good job! Cheers!

      Have a nice day,

      Rosie

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Emma, thanks for the comment. I will check your work out for sure. We can always get better. Hard works always pays off.

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      Emma Zimmer 

      6 years ago from USA

      Good lyrics. lyrics like that don't always take time to learn, but they do take a soul and love. I didn't get my gift from the Lord, i got it from a strong soul, and love. Your writing is good, but always remember it can always get better. my writing can of course get better to.

      ~Emma Zimmer

      P.S. take a look at my hub if you want to see MY song lyrics

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Writer20, thanks a million for your time, vote, and comment. It is much appreciated. Your feedback means a lot. Do take care.

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Greatly told poem it's beautiful. up/beautiful

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Kamalesh, thanks again for coming by and thanks for your thoughtful comment. I am glad you thought of it this way. Hope your Monday treats you good! Best to you. :)

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      Kamalesh050 

      6 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Very Beautiful poem, excellent writing style and a great flow.

      Voted Up.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Marcoujor, thank you so much for your vote and heartfelt comment. It is comments like yours that make me love what I do. Take care and have a good Sunday!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Marcoujor, thank you so much for your vote and heartfelt comment. It is comments like yours that make me love what I do. Take care and have a good Sunday!

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      Maria Jordan 

      6 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      thelyricwriter,

      This piece felt to me like you were healing yourself, me and so many others... with some well placed, powerful yet peaceful words. You have a beautiful gift.

      Voted UP & AB- have a lovely day, mar.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Thanks for your vote September Girl and for reading the article. I appreciate your time dearly.

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      september girl 

      6 years ago

      Nice! Voted up and awesome! : )

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Epicgramman, thank you so much for that comment. It truly touches me. But I am the one that should be honored. Thank you for your time and thoughtful comment. It is nice to know that the Hub community is such well mannered citizens as yourself. All the comments are very encouraging. Take care.

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      epigramman 

      6 years ago

      ....quite an imposing poetic manifesto my friend - obviously no one has to teach you on how to write because you already know the secret! (and don't let it out) lake erie time ontario canada 4:33pm and thank you so much for your royal endorsement (and fan mail) of my hmble little hubspace - coming from such a great writer as yourself - it really means a lot.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Thank you Hear Me. I appreciate your time.

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      Hear Me 

      6 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

      Beautiful.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Movie Master, thank you for your time and thoughtful comment. It is well worth it when someone feels inspired or touched by the words. Take care.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Gypsy, thank you so much for the comment. I am glad you find it inspiring. Many thanks.

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      Movie Master 

      6 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi thelyricwriter, Fabulous poem,I like 'I know I can't change my past But I can the way I act and feel' very inspiring!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very beautiful and inspiring poem!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Rosemay, thanks a million for reading. You are correct. Sometimes just letting go of the past can be a fresh start. Thanks for coming by.

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Rosemay, thanks a million for reading. You are correct. Sometimes just letting go of the past can be a fresh start. Thanks for coming by.

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      Rosemary Sadler 

      6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Beautiful. There comes a time when we need to let the past go and have a brand new start.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Cloverleaf, thank you very much, you are so kind. It is never too late to start over, fresh and new. Thanks for reading!

    • thelyricwriter profile imageAUTHOR

      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Cresentmoon, thank you for your vote. And thank you for your time.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Ubanichijioke, you are so correct. No matter what, we have to move on. Well said. Thanks for the comment.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Peggy, thank you very much for your kind words. Thanks for reading.

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      Cloverleaf 

      6 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      This was great, lyricwriter! Very inspiring to think of today as a brand new start. Up/Awesome!

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      Cresentmoon2007 

      6 years ago from Caledonia, MI

      Voted up! Well written and very true. Thank you for posting.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 

      6 years ago from Lagos

      Our past hold stories good and bad. But we must stand up and live for the future.

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      Peggy Woods 

      6 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Nicely stated. Not much we can do about our past but to go forward with a clear conscience and do the best we can. You summed it up perfectly with your last sentence:

      "Today is my new beginning

      As I leave behind the ashes of my past"

      Voted up!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      Thank you both for the comments. It is greatly appreciated.

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      Tracy Robinson 

      6 years ago from Mauk, Georgia

      Well said. Well said. Love the image.

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      lostwithinmyself 

      6 years ago

      Beautifully written. x

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