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Poem: Goodbye

Updated on June 28, 2018

When loving hatred still bleeds,

pain memories knock,

‘til unconsciousness rocks.

Shatter images sucks,

‘til your heart was crashed.

When nothing’s left but goodbye...

It becomes a poisonous bile,

a bitter cry

‘til it kills you with shedding lies.

Savoring the melting fire,

giving you with a zombie sigh.


Goodbyes can make anyone cries, especially if that goodbye means a lifetime wound in one's heart. It's really hard to go on but hey that's life! Yesterday might be bitter, today is sour and then tomorrow might be salty. It will depends on how you are going to take it but make sure to move on. Always remember, when all of these things blend together, life might be the sweetest thing on earth. Your journey could be spiced up and you will never be bored...better than tasteless! :)

We are lucky to be here and alive so appreciate even the smallest thing in your day. Wasting your time lamenting will not do any good.

Don't give up yet, we still have the chance to make our life the best and mouthwatering. Hope and believe that the best taste is yet to come!

Cheer up!

© 2009 pinkhawk


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    • Claudia Tello profile image

      Claudia Tello 

      6 years ago from Mexico

      Interesting topic to write a poem on; learning to say goodbye is a good way of keeping ourselves up and happily alive through the inevitable separations of life. Sometimes we just have to let go and be grateful for what we have lived.

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      7 years ago

      that is what life are... agree with u pinkhawk...

    • pinkhawk profile imageAUTHOR


      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hi Simply Jill, thank you very much for leaving a comment and for sharing your thoughts, yes I agree! ^.^

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      Simply Jill 

      8 years ago

      love it ! It's so true, we tend to take the simple blessings for granted when their is so much worth being grateful for. Life it truly to short!

      Thank you , I enjoyed this :)

    • pinkhawk profile imageAUTHOR


      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hello ma'am Joy56! Your the first once who leave a comment, Thank you soo much!... I was thinking to make changes here but still don't have the drive to write...

      I'm also glad to know you here at HP, ^.^..I'm looking forward to read more of your work..^.^

    • Joy56 profile image


      8 years ago

      i like the message this conveys, and your style of writing, so happy to have met you....


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