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Paper boat

Updated on July 1, 2014
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

Paper boat moves silently

In a pallid lake

Reflecting our grief

Upon a dream

Stolen by a sudden gust of wind.


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      Suzette Walker 2 years ago from Taos, NM

      Simply beautiful. Voted up+ and shared!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      This poem is a miracle. Jamie

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      Linda Rogers 2 years ago from Minnesota

      Wow James-so much said in so little. Very eloquent. Sharing all over :)

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      Liz Elias 2 years ago from Oakley, CA

      Very, very nice!

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      Tori Canonge 2 years ago from California

      It only took five lines to create something beautiful. Awesome job!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      suzettenaples,

      Thanks for the comment and vote.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Jhamann,

      Thanks so much for your wonderful comment.Have a wonderful weekend!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Minnetonka Twin ,

      Thanks for the visit.I appreciate it! Have a wonderful Sunday!

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      Melvin Augustine 15 months ago from India

      Loved It!

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