Passing Through: A Poem
No body to slow you
on your travels along the rail
Softly floating to and fro
whispering your exciting tale.
No one to suspect
you’re even in our midst
A cool breath on the air
A sweet tender kiss.
No trials to ponder
tribulations are for yesterday
Bright and light, you traverse
You pass me on your way.
No need to worry
you're showing just a glow
I know that you were here
Free as the wind does blow.
©LMY 4.6.2012
Comments
This could easily be written about most people rather than the train...just a glimpse we are to most people, passing by, barely a whisper that we were there at all....I really like this. Great job my friend! Have a wonderful weekend.
Very nice, I like it! Up and across.
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Bill, that's very true. I love how you put it! Thanks and you have a wonderful weekend, too!
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Jackie, thank you so much!
Love it. I think I'll check out the movie from Amazon, too. Thanks.
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Sandra, I'm glad you liked it!
Lisa, I like this poem. it's short and good . my style of poetry. you seem to write some of your best this way. love ya,
Michael
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Michael, thank you! I wrote it pretty quick! I'm glad you liked it!
Ahhh..another wonder to ponder..You have a way with painting a picture with your words,what a gift !
***HOPPING** you have a great Bunny week-end.
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kj force, thank you! I've been having so much "hopping" fun this weekend, I can't even concentrate on my writing! =P I hope you have a wonderful weekend, too!
Very nice poetry EclecticFusion. I see the double meaning in this lovely prose.
Voted up and awesome. Loved it. Got to reading and it almost ended too soon so entranced I was.
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Minnetonka Twin, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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Gypsy, thank you! I should have made it longer, but most of the time, my mind tells me when to stop and I have to obey!
mmmmmm...this is lovely, Eclectic! Please..keep chugging along, in your soft, subtle way!
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ImKarn23, thank you! I'll keep trying!
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