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Passing Through: A Poem

Updated on April 6, 2012
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No body to slow you

on your travels along the rail

Softly floating to and fro

whispering your exciting tale.


No one to suspect

you’re even in our midst

A cool breath on the air

A sweet tender kiss.


No trials to ponder

tribulations are for yesterday

Bright and light, you traverse

You pass me on your way.


No need to worry

you're showing just a glow

I know that you were here

Free as the wind does blow.


©LMY 4.6.2012


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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      ImKarn23, thank you! I'll keep trying!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      mmmmmm...this is lovely, Eclectic! Please..keep chugging along, in your soft, subtle way!

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Gypsy, thank you! I should have made it longer, but most of the time, my mind tells me when to stop and I have to obey!

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Minnetonka Twin, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Loved it. Got to reading and it almost ended too soon so entranced I was.

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Very nice poetry EclecticFusion. I see the double meaning in this lovely prose.

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      kj force, thank you! I've been having so much "hopping" fun this weekend, I can't even concentrate on my writing! =P I hope you have a wonderful weekend, too!

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Ahhh..another wonder to ponder..You have a way with painting a picture with your words,what a gift !

      ***HOPPING** you have a great Bunny week-end.

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Michael, thank you! I wrote it pretty quick! I'm glad you liked it!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lisa, I like this poem. it's short and good . my style of poetry. you seem to write some of your best this way. love ya,

      Michael

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Sandra, I'm glad you liked it!

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      Sandra Busby 5 years ago from Tuscaloosa, Alabama, USA

      Love it. I think I'll check out the movie from Amazon, too. Thanks.

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Jackie, thank you so much!

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      Lisa 5 years ago from Tennessee

      Bill, that's very true. I love how you put it! Thanks and you have a wonderful weekend, too!

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very nice, I like it! Up and across.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      This could easily be written about most people rather than the train...just a glimpse we are to most people, passing by, barely a whisper that we were there at all....I really like this. Great job my friend! Have a wonderful weekend.