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Lailak Poem
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A Lailak poem
The girl from Atlanta
Near the Georgia Dome
The poem was very spiffy
'Bout the teenage years
Talkin' 'bout her feelings
And some teenage fears
The gal's got talent
That's an obvious fact
Spittin' out knowledge
That you cannot retract
With inborn talent
Using paper and pen
She tells life stories
With a poetic spin
So if you have a moment
Take a stop by her page
Her poems are really poppin'
Soon to be all the rage
……….a poem for Lailak ( not to be confused with the flower Lilac you dig?)
Comments
- Author
I'm glad that you do.
I really like the minor edits and changes :)
I really like the minor edits and changes :)
Absolutely! Very true :) I'm always alert to when my inspirational moments come so I can write about them.
- Author
Thank you. I am humbled. Never been called amazing before. I just do what I do. I kind of lost the rhythm in the third stanza but I'll clean that up when I have time. I've been writing since I was your age so I've had lots of practice. That along with inborn talent like yourself which is how I recognized your ability. A lesson in this is: inspiration for a writer may come at any time and at any place and they must be ready to "go with the flow" because if they don't they may lose the inspiring thought and it may never come back. Inspiration can come from anywhere and a writer must recognize it when it comes.
Woooow! I just read this! Sorry for dropping by late and checking out your awesomeness. I am so very flattered! Thank YOU! You are absolutely amazing!
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