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Peachtree Gal (poem)

Updated on February 2, 2015

Lailak Poem

Just finished reading on

A Lailak poem

The girl from Atlanta

Near the Georgia Dome


The poem was very spiffy

'Bout the teenage years

Talkin' 'bout her feelings

And some teenage fears


The gal's got talent

That's an obvious fact

Spittin' out knowledge

That you cannot retract


With inborn talent

Using paper and pen

She tells life stories

With a poetic spin


So if you have a moment

Take a stop by her page

Her poems are really poppin'

Soon to be all the rage


……….a poem for Lailak ( not to be confused with the flower Lilac you dig?)

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      LailaK 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Woooow! I just read this! Sorry for dropping by late and checking out your awesomeness. I am so very flattered! Thank YOU! You are absolutely amazing!

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      Tony Daniels 2 years ago from Toledo, Ohio

      Thank you. I am humbled. Never been called amazing before. I just do what I do. I kind of lost the rhythm in the third stanza but I'll clean that up when I have time. I've been writing since I was your age so I've had lots of practice. That along with inborn talent like yourself which is how I recognized your ability. A lesson in this is: inspiration for a writer may come at any time and at any place and they must be ready to "go with the flow" because if they don't they may lose the inspiring thought and it may never come back. Inspiration can come from anywhere and a writer must recognize it when it comes.

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      LailaK 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Absolutely! Very true :) I'm always alert to when my inspirational moments come so I can write about them.

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      LailaK 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I really like the minor edits and changes :)

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      LailaK 2 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I really like the minor edits and changes :)

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      Tony Daniels 2 years ago from Toledo, Ohio

      I'm glad that you do.

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