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Updated on June 7, 2015
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

Under parody of daylight,

We sit so quite,

On white-pink sheet,

Pleasingly neat .




Watching rolling waves of grass

Swaying en masse

Down the mountains,

Like blown curtains.




Your soft hand pressing hard on mine,

Shivers down spine,

Cheeks apples red

Call for a bed .

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      another little gem here my friend

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      Linda Rogers 2 years ago from Minnesota

      Love it! Short, Sweet and to the point.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      I like the use of "soft" and "hard" referring to the same object. Good poetry!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Frank,

      thanks a lot for dropping by and commented.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Love the sweet imagery your words paint. Blessings always

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Minnetonka Twin ,

      Thanks for the comment.This kind of poetry is called:" Minute Poetry". It is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff

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      Linda Rogers 2 years ago from Minnesota

      Thanks for that information on this type of poem. I love learning new forms of poetry and trying them out.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Minnetonka Twin,

      You' re welcome.Try this site,it's useful:

      http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.ht...

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      Elena 23 months ago from London, UK

      Refreshing poem and I love the photo too.

      Hope you enjoyed Eid. :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 23 months ago from Morocco

      Lady_E,

      Yeah I did ;) Thanks.

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