Planetary Alignments: a Poem
Planetary Dreaming
Jupiter, Saturn,
Venus, Mars:
Just hanging out
down by the moon.
Jupiter's jealous
of Saturn's face:
"I'll teach that show-off--
a ring's not hard to spin!"
Just hanging out,
down by the moon...
It's pale midnight--
the shadowy stars have fled
from the face of the moon:
Her full-bright power
intimidates those stars,
But the planets know
it's only a trick,
So they all hang out,
down by the moon.
Crescent Moon
Backstory
Originally written in July of 1988, and revised a little in May of 2010, this poem came about because of a particular planetary alignment on that night; a night when it was exceptionally clear to boot; a rarity at that time of year in Pacifica, CA, where I lived at the time.
© 2010 Liz Elias