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Poem: Hate Vomit

Updated on February 29, 2020

Hate Vomit

you feel it twisting in your stomach

it burns in your abdomen like fire

a rampaging bull riding up your gorge

your face turns red and you heave

i hate you i hate you

i wish you would die

i loathe you, despise you

my kind words were lies

it may not be what you said

but your wheezing and hacking

tells me all i need to know

while you're doubled over in violent hatred

i hate you i hate you

i wish you would die

i loathe you, despise you

my kind words were lies

with tears in your eyes

and wiping your mouth

the waves of hate have diminished

your hate vomit has run out..

i still hate you

i still hate you

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      melissa 

      8 years ago

      um wtf!!?!

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      Malcolm_Cox 

      9 years ago from Newcastle, England

      Was this episode a result of drinking copious amounts of alcohol? Great stuff!

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      x Da x 

      10 years ago

      very nice, you deffinetly captured what its like when thats happening.. well at least thats how i feel lol =]

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      Michelle Simtoco 

      12 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      Very real emotions. I too have experienced these feelings before and in my mind's eyes I saw hundreds of plates flying and hitting a certain person. Whew! Boy am I glad I am getting healed, it was very tiring to be angry.

      -michelle

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      Isabella Snow 

      12 years ago

      Very passionate!

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      Kiz Robinson 

      12 years ago from New Orleans, Louisiana

      Thank you Kenny! I can only hope that my poems have, and will be, a display of the extremes of human emotion. Our emotions are rarely mild, though we may hide them.

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      Ashok Rajagopalan 

      12 years ago from Chennai

      Yes, I agree.

      And a poem is a personal thing, rhyme and reason belong entirely to the writer. So, logically speaking, there should be nothing to criticise. But I can say what I feel, and I appreciate the anger and hate in the poem. 

      Keep going, Charlotte!

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      Kiz Robinson 

      12 years ago from New Orleans, Louisiana

      A note to the anonymous thumbs downs which will invariably come from my posting this hub: Good or bad, I feel that sharing my original poetry with the Hubpages community is a boon to it as a whole. If you would like to provide criticism, please feel free to comment rather than leaving a thumbs down and saying nothing. Thank you!

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