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Poem: I Dun'no Yet

Updated on October 11, 2017
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Tim Mitchell has been writing poetry since high school. He enjoys exploring them, the many forms, and writing them

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Rising high above its warmth spread like a mom’s hug,

Good morning, good morning whispered gently to my ears,

Darkness recedes, its mystery where it goes always with me,

I dun’no yet.


Walking with no expectations comforted by hopes of new discovery,

Familiar scent fills the air full of exciting robust adventures ahead,

Heard is the quaint silence of yesterday saying goodbye as today arrives,

I dun’no yet.


Dusk’s dreams dash between glimpses of reality’s tale of now’s presence,

Understood is promises for next have no guarantee until first a step taken,

Standing at window a familiar mug filled full seen are new shadows arriving,

I dun’no yet.


Echoes of my love arrive sharing friendship is eternal and always a smile,

Heard is encouragement a next step is like a breath of mornings’ fresh air,

Today offers new songs of joyous occasion filling my heart full of my friend,

Now I know.

© 2017 Tim Mitchell

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      Tim Mitchell 3 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thanks for the visit Bill :-) This is a fav poem of mine.

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      Bill Holland 3 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Great images with your words and quite frankly they make me jealous. :) Happy New Year my friend.

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      Tim Mitchell 4 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Hello Frank! I love when I watch the sunlight break in upon the garden as I peer through the window. A glimpse . . .

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      Frank Atanacio 4 months ago from Shelton

      Tim.. I love this line: Dusk’s dreams dash between glimpses of reality’s tale: Wish I would have thought of it.. love the poem.. and I do know..LOL

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      Tim Mitchell 5 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank yo9u manatita44. Nice to see you . . .

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      manatita44 5 months ago from london

      A 'fresh' and loving poem, like the cool zephyrs of Spring. Well done, Tim

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      Tim Mitchell 6 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank You Larry!

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      Larry Rankin 6 months ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderfully done.

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      Tim Mitchell 6 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thanks Devika for reading.

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      Devika Primić 6 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautiful and simple for the heart.

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      Tim Mitchell 6 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Its good to see you Dianna. Thank you for visiting.

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      Dianna Mendez 6 months ago

      Truly a great poem, especially the ending.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank you Gypsy for reading and commenting.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 7 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      So beautiful and most inspirational.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Hello Audrey. I like that line too as I now have smile thinking of it.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Hello John. Thanks for reading and the kind comment.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Good day Three Keys. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Hello Venkatachari. Thanks for the observation and kind comment.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank you Eric.

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      Tim Mitchell 7 months ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank you Mark. I like thinking of awakening to the morning is like a hug from mom.

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      Audrey Hunt 7 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Such a beautiful poem Tim. My favorite line is "Echoes of my love arrive sharing friendship is eternal and always a smile". Thank you so much.

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      John Hansen 7 months ago from Queensland Australia

      A satisfying beginning and end in this well-written poem. Good work, Tim.

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      Threekeys 7 months ago from Australia

      What a beautiful, comforting moment captured to illustrate how our quiet everyday moments can be inspiring. Lovely, Tim.

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      Venkatachari M 7 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very much touching expression of the poet's feelings and state of mind. The ending lines are great stressing on the friendships, love, and the ultimate realization. Enjoyed it a lot.

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      Eric Dierker 7 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      This is a good one, Thanks

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      Mark Tulin 7 months ago from Santa Barbara, California

      Great first line. What a wonderful way to start a poem than with a mother's hug.

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