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Poems in Symmetry

Updated on March 14, 2016
Le  Bua, Bangkok
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Poems in Cemetery

Impromptu Landing
Did you know then,
how it would end?

Fragmented stares
a star commodity
famous and infamous
in a word

Don't mind the Art
imaginary farce
ant hill

A little foreign exchange
from the dark side
Left side
Left side of the road
Left-over and out.


Are you on a mission from GOD?

In L'America,

maybe even today,
the third eye
dollar sign
pyramid above
burning Logos
to dust
or bust.

I couldn't
your sigh
nor mine
our sense of relief

Knowing nothing
owing nothing
to another I-Ching edge
knowing you minus the ledge
equals powerful
mind altering

"Killers on the Road"
Another movie roof top metaphor
to close the Door
to end the feast
of friends
forever wanting

More and Amore

So ride that snake
and eat your cake
forget my name
remember your game.

Silent seduction
stare into my eyes
and give me your hand
in this promised land.

On Any Given Sunday



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    • Prisana profile imageAUTHOR

      Prisana Nuechterlein 

      8 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

      Thanks for your great comment. Sorry I just saw it. I've been traveling in Thailand and have been thoroughly enjoying the twists and turns of another amazing journey.

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      Mike Pugh 

      8 years ago from New York City

      Intense is the best way to express what I felt from reading this poem. it throws me left, then right, back left lol, and I was like wow, this poem was fun to read.

      Thanks for sharing such a creative poem with us. Voted up as funny, interesting & beautiful.

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      9 years ago

      ...yes .... I am with Mr. Pacino on this one - your writing and its poetic reflections often require a re-read in order to grasp its inner meaning which to me is the reflection of a great writer who has a lot to say - and can say it very well .....

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    • Prisana profile imageAUTHOR

      Prisana Nuechterlein 

      9 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

      Hello Raciniwa,

      Impromptu means unplanned, sudden or unprepared. This poem was inspired by a string of impromptu landings!

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      9 years ago from Talisay City, Cebu

      i'll's interesting...what's in impromptu landing?

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      9 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Images bursting like hand grenades in swift sequence...Each line giving rise to those thoughts existing on the edge of our perception...

      " to end the feast of friends forever wanting " trades on your experiences in P.I. with wonderful juxtaposition...

      My experience was quite different...1966 Subic Bay and Manila was awash in drugs, prostitution, and crime...Never did learn to like baluts...

      Voted up, beautiful, and evocative ( I added this last button )...Larry

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      9 years ago from Nepal

      I have written a poem about Cemetery but not good as yours.

    • Prisana profile imageAUTHOR

      Prisana Nuechterlein 

      9 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

      Hi mckbirdks,

      I was hesitant to post this one. Like you said: "an awful lot is going on..." Perhaps too much! Thanks for giving it a whirl.

    • Prisana profile imageAUTHOR

      Prisana Nuechterlein 

      9 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

      Hi Scarface1300,

      I tried to allude to the real meaning behind this poem, without spelling it out. But I suppose the beauty of art is that there is freedom of interpretation. Thanks for voting up and beautiful.

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      9 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      An awful lot is going on here. It must be read a few times to grasp your messages. now, i'll go vote

    • Scarface1300 profile image


      9 years ago

      Brilliant use of words, will need to read it a few times to grasp its total.....I'll be back.

      UP and beautiful...Thank you


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