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Poetic Attacks

Updated on October 18, 2013

Have
you noticed?
I’m a warrior too. My weaponry is not
sweet words inked on white elegant papers
which aimed for sale
nor dreams smuggled in as Cuban cigars
But sharp mind, stronger
than your
poetic attacks.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very interesting and profound! You are a warrior indeed.

      Up and more

      Have a wonderful weekend,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      when you write political poetry ..you open yourself up to varied views ..as we have them all ..! have a nice day my friend

      Michael

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Michael,

      Sorry to say this is not about politics.It is about love and the person who speaks there is my girlfriend who doesn't like poetry ,but novels she adores. Unfortunately,I am a short distance runner,always pushed by time and many other duties.That s why I can t write novels ;)

      Have a great weekend!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Thanks so much for the comment and vote.I hope it will work out for us,recently we have a lot of debates ,only at night lol

      Have a great weekend!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      A pen and a sword. Let them have it! Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      jhamann,

      A pen and a sword were the Arab knights weapons of the old times.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, we are each individual in our minds and spirit, but when we come together in marriage we become one flesh... how lovely, but still each unique!

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      And the poetry you write is very powerful and tighter with each new scroll. Another excellent write.

      Blessings,

      Kim

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      I will call her to read this lol maybe it will put an end to her endless whines lol

      Tons of Hugs and Much Love to You,

      Tijani

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      A hard defense of mind it takes to accomplish that. Good one James.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Wayne,

      Thanks my friend for your insight!

      Have a wonderful day!!

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      Kari Shinal 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

      Words can maim, they only cause dents that are reparable. Thanks James!

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Poetic Attacks a well though of poem with a special meaning

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Tuatha,

      Very true.Sometimes it s better to stay "shutdown"verbally and emotionally.

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