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Hope that's yet to bloom- Off the top of my head...been a while

Updated on June 16, 2013

Hope that's yet to bloom

Prosperity; It's bare to me

It's a worn heart; and skidded knees

It's the brush off from reality

It's the vivid loathing; the darkness I see

The stitched up fragment of my memory

I'm crafted with bone; a pure design

A fractured hope composed of time

The clock ticks with a rigid rhyme

Caught by the empty thoughts of mine


A still of words held in the air;

You know them as a simple prayer

I know them as salvation's hand

When it seemed simply like a time to go.


Hope has a way of linking deep

A gentle touch embraced with sleep

A lullaby never meant so much

Because waking up meant feeling more

It's these times; we soon expire

Becoming fuel to damaged fire

Cause as hopes slowly consume

We're left as hope that's yet to bloom




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      Firoz 3 years ago from India

      Nice poem. Voted up.

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      Cathy Nerujen 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      The greatest prosperity I have ever known or experienced is in the hearts of people and friends I care about. That is what I hoped to find in your poem here, and yes - the seeds of it are there. It just needs a few more.

      Hope does have a way of "linking deep" just as you say. This is a nice poem. Nicely written. A gentle hymn in hope for better things...

      Tweeted and enjoyed, and perhaps a small suggestion as to the title. I would shorten it to what it ought to be. Let the poem find its way.

      You really are a great poet. :)

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      Sean 3 years ago from PA

      Greatly appreciated, thank you. It's always nice to receive feedback , i could potentially shorten the title, would require some thought, I often like to tie my poems title to the way I end it in the writing

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Enjoyed reading this. There's always hope. It can't ever be fully consumed unless we allow it to be.

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