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Poetry- Surrender

Updated on March 10, 2011

Theres a fear loomin out the darkness
as i gaze into the hole
these eerie toughts have crept up inside
taking over my soul
never could have just a part of it
helped me get by
i see the vision is quite bleak tonight


theres an old man praying in silence
as i look out the window
the shades of grey reminding me
each day we have to die
for life is just a part of it
but i need more to get by
the world has lost all its hope tonight


she walked into my life
and i held my head up high
but theres still pain living inside of me
and i dont think shed realise
i could go for a fatalist's remedy
but i need more to get by
guess she's gonna give up on me tonight


as i roam inside my weary head
picking each thought on the way
i see my life's been already dead
there's nothing left to say
your memory still surrounding me
but i need more to get by

if i could i'd surrender to your will tonight 

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      wow hasseeb this one is my fave by you. i love the ending lines with tonight.

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      i wanted to make a song out of it.. but i couldn't really compose :( lol.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      i have a bunch of poems that I want to be songs but yea they are just lyrics awaiting the music that I will never know how to write.

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      h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

      hmmm maybe one day.. when i'm creative enough :p

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