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Ocean - Poem Ode

Updated on May 12, 2018
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Here I lie in an open space

Gushing silently day by day

Peacefully moaning through and through

Loudly I speaking to you

Know one understands me

When I speak

Yet many walk pass me as they creep

I see you holding hands as you walk by

Even diving deeply in my pride


I feel the wind so near

touch me holding me without fear

I hear children laughing watching me as I roar

Some cast lines at me but never touching my floor


Pulling at me yet they miss

Not able to hold not even in their fist

Don’t you know I am more than you can see?

I’m deep in the shore buried within the seas…

I see you , you see me

But I’m deeper than you and will always be

Who Am I

And what is my name?

Deeply I'm buried in the snow


Here I lie in an open space


Gushing silently day by day


Peacefully moaning through and through


Loudly I speaking to you


No one understands me


When I speak


Yet many walk pass me as they creep


I see you holding hands as you walk by


Even diving deeply in my pride


I feel the air


Without me you can not bear


I hear children laughing watching me as I roar


Some cast lines at me never touch my floor



Pulling at me yet you miss


You can’t hold me in your fist


Don’t you know I am more than you can see?


I’m deep in the shore buried in the seas…


I see you see me


But I’m deeper than you and will always be


By, Lynn

Lie in an open space?@copyright 2010

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    • lyns profile imageAUTHOR

      lyns 

      6 years ago from USA

      Hello AuFait, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem "Ocean" and commenting I appreciate you reading it and comments, I hope you are have a great evening 71921411p lyns

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      C E Clark 

      6 years ago from North Texas

      Very well expressed. Voted up and interesting and will share.

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      Ryan 

      8 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Very peaceful and majestic. Great flow and great words chosen to paint a beautiful picture with words. Great work. Voted beautiful and voted up.

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      lyns 

      8 years ago from USA

      Hi Suziecat17, thank you I am glad you took the time to stop to read and comment, I hope you have a great day, lyns

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      suziecat7 

      8 years ago from Asheville, NC

      really good poem - glad I found it.

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      lyns 

      8 years ago from USA

      Hello Jackie Lynnle, just logging on again today, you are welcome thanks for reading this poem "Ocean," and taking the time to comment, hope you have a great day. Happy Holidays. lyns

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      Jackie Lynnley 

      8 years ago from the beautiful south

      Like being there, very good.

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      lyns 

      8 years ago from USA

      Hi Sky9106, my friend thanks so much glad you liked this one, actually it's one of my old ones revised, lol, it's about 5 years old. Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment. Have a great day. Happy Holidays

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      Sky9106 

      8 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Going deeper and deeper lyns . I see you were at work so I have work to do myself . Make a few more visits..

      Keep writing , and sharing your truths .

      Bless. Happy holidays.

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      lyns 

      9 years ago from USA

      @icciev: Thank you once again for taking the time to read my poem and your time to comment, I appreicate your comment, I have got to go to bed hope I am making sense right about now, it's 5:35 am where did the time go, lol

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      icciev 

      9 years ago from Kuwait

      well written, nice words. Voted up

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      lyns 

      9 years ago from USA

      @jami l. pereira: Your welcome, I thank you for stopping by and sharing this poem with me, I'm glad you like it I love the sea/ocean as well it is so much more to it than we see, thanks for taking the time to read and comment, Have a good one

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      jami l. pereira 

      9 years ago

      I love the sea , or any body of water for that matter ,i loved this , very well written and thought out ! I voted up and aweosme ,thanks for the read!:)

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      lyns 

      9 years ago from USA

      rjsadowsk: yes that is true but this is a poem about the ocean, that who it is and that's the name, thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment, I appreciate it, have a good one

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      rjsadowski 

      9 years ago

      I hope that some day soon you will find the answers. No one can tell us who we are. We must find out for ourselves.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 

      9 years ago from Lagos

      You re so welcome!

    • lyns profile imageAUTHOR

      lyns 

      9 years ago from USA

      Thank you for stopping by and reading this, I appreciate your comment

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      Lynn 

      9 years ago

      @ubanichiijoke, thank you

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 

      9 years ago from Lagos

      Quite metaphoric and ironic. Such is life. Sensational poem. Well written and awesome. Voted beautiful, awesome and interesting. Be blessed

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