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Prepay Plan, a Short Story

Updated on January 8, 2018
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Tamara Wilhite is a technical writer, industrial engineer, mother of 2, and a published sci-fi and horror author.

A Short Story by Tamara Wilhite

As he walked into the church sanctuary, Lee heard his cell phone buzz to inform him its payment function has been activated. Lee glanced around before approaching one of the deacons. “Guys, I think there’s a thief here; my RFID pay pass was used –“

“Oh, what do you think of our new donation system?” the deacon asked.

“You know about it?” Lee asked.

“Oh, yes, it was installed earlier this week.” The deacon beamed brightly. “Isn’t it wonderful?”

“I just had my account debited.” Lee’s hands instinctively covered his wallet. “I didn’t agree to this – to you all just taking money out of my account.”

“We had a discussion on it at our last financial meeting. Everyone was invited. There was so much concern about cash handling and deposits to the bank, and about too few parishioners doing the donating. We agreed nearly unanimously – and far over the 60% amount required by church policy – to install the system.” Lee followed the deacon’s eyes up, and saw the device that had sent the signal to his debit card and relayed the information from there to the bank and from there to the church’s bank account. “It debits the account of everyone here with a toll tag or payment chip or pre-programmed cell phone with credit card codes.”

“How much do you take?” Lee asked.

“The standard amount.”

Lee raised an eyebrow, trying not to get visibly angry in front of everyone else. “How much is the standard amount? $20? $49.99?”

This short story is by Tamara Wilhite, author of "Humanity's Edge".
This short story is by Tamara Wilhite, author of "Humanity's Edge". | Source

“Ten percent of your stated income or 10% of your last checking account deposit, of course.”

The anger was too much to contain. Lee announced indignantly, “That’s outrageous!”

The deacon smiled gently, as if Lee should have known all of this already. “The congregation agreed to take the biblical amount. As a member of our church, you’ve agreed -”

“What if I don’t agree to it?” Lee challenged.

“You came in, didn’t you?” The deacon pointed to a sign in the lobby. “And we did put up a sign at the entrance for those who might not have attended the finance meeting. Didn’t you read it?”

Lee couldn’t bring himself to admit that he saw no reason to bother reading the posted signs. He’d just listen to the announcements at the start of service before turning on his iTunes. “Well, then, maybe I won’t come so often,” Lee stammered.

“How often you choose to attend is your business. However, we are talking about the business of saving your soul.”

“Then I’ll go to another church,” Lee retorted.

“If you’re hoping to avoid the new prepay option, I just want to warn you - the idea is catching on fast, so going elsewhere may not exempt you from this experience.” The deacon’s smile became gentler. “The only other option is to not go to church – and the price of that is your soul.”

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    Tamara Wilhite 

    11 months ago from Fort Worth, Texas

    If you enjoyed this story, consider reading my other works at:

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    https://www.amazon.com/-/e/B073WNRYHP

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    Tamara Wilhite 

    6 years ago from Fort Worth, Texas

    It's probably simony, but it could also be seen as using technology to make what we "ought" to do more convenient. Like tolltags billing you when you drive onto the toll road, automatically hitting your credit card or bank account.

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    Evylyn Rose 

    6 years ago from Virginia, USA

    Although I am not of a faith that has tithing, I am not unfamiliar with it. What I have never understood is why tithing is always equated with money. Giving of one's time, energy, talents, and the like all contribute to one's community. Giving a tithe means we should be contributing to our communities to ensure their survival, so why should anyone of any faith be led to believe that money is the only way to do so?

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    Tamara Wilhite 

    6 years ago from Fort Worth, Texas

    I write technical articles for a living. The endless financial drain of the "toll tag" automatically pinging me for driving made me wonder about other uses for this technology (like the swipe and pay RFID chipped payment cards).

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    Brian Leekley 

    6 years ago from Kalamazoo, Michigan, USA

    Something similar happened to me, except in politics. I sent what I thought was a one time debit card donation, and my checking account got debited every month after that until I closed the account. As for a church saying pay us or lose your soul, isn't that simony?

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