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Promise A Poem About Friendship

Updated on September 17, 2010

A Poem About Friendship


Open your eyes and see inside.
Come walk towards tomorrow with me.
Speak openly as there is nothing to hide.
Friends can listen and help one to see.
Life can be hard and cold.
Lonely moments follow anothers slight.
I promise to be there as life unfolds.
A friend you can depend on to bring you light!

written by Becky Jo Gibson November 2006©


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      Tammy 6 years ago from USA

      Beautifully written! Words so true...Thanks!

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      Becky Jo Gibson 6 years ago from Old Town, California

      Thank you!

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      epigramman 6 years ago sincere and written with such clarity and a deft use of poetic simplicity - less is more I always say - and you have said a lot in a direct, concise and economical approach - but believe me this approach is most effective and drives straight to the heart!

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      ZulmaDear 6 years ago from TheCrosses, LasCruces

      isn't that the truth :)

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      Becky Jo Gibson 7 years ago from Old Town, California

      thank you dear one...I want to let you know that at this time in my life I am without...Life is what it is and I wonder each day how I will make it...I will to be sure yet?

      Peace and God Bless...Becky Jo aka Inspired Hippy

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      Cathy Nerujen 7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      This is a lovely poem and loyal tribute to friendship. I love the second line, this is so inspiring. There is nothing greater than having some one like that to be by your side as you go through life, who is there for you. I am going through this in my life right now. I can so relate. Glad to be a fan of yours Becky Jo. And thanks for the comments you made on my Naked and Born hub. Take care.

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      Leni Sands 7 years ago from UK

      Never more true, great poem.