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All About Paris

Updated on October 22, 2010

All About Paris

Not Paris smirking at defeated ships while they sailed away,

But Paris sleeping as night spilled open, ending Troy’s final Day.



Not Paris ridiculed by love, before slain by Romeo,

But faithful Paris at her tomb, where his final breath he did let go.



Not Paris gazing eastward while hope escaped at Dunkirk,

But Paris marching west… ending with each step the Devil’s work.



Like the sea patiently waiting for dark cover to caress the lonely shore,

Nothing is forsaken… wait for the moment, and then wait some more



Pathos is for poets, and would-be dreamers afraid to sleep,

Lose no battle before defeated, give no quarter, do not retreat.

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      lightning john 6 years ago from Florida

      Very nice , GreekOne. I do not recall this one so I'm guessing that it is yours?

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      Greek One 6 years ago

      thanks.. yup,i wrote it... was going to add a part about Paris Hilton, but thought twice :)

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      must65gt 6 years ago

      Nicely written and well versed. One area I found might need editing. "Like the sea patiently waiting for dark cover to caress the lonely shore, (this sttod out from the flow of the poem) perhaps "like the sea waiting for dark to caress the lonley shore," A nice read though, thanks.

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      lightning john 6 years ago from Florida

      Good idea not add Paris Hilton, you wouldn't want to trash it up. ha ha I know you are just kidding. That's what I like about you, your great humor, especially in the forums. And I think the way you wrote it is just fine!

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      snagerries 6 years ago from Singapore

      Thats a great one..I am sure I havent read it before and it is your original creation. You love Paris?

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      Elayne 6 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      so romantic - Paris, I was there once ...

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      I also have visited Paris, but could not write as you do. I am impressed.

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      Greek One 6 years ago

      I haven't been there myself... but I have tried fries from that country :)

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      Ben Evans 6 years ago

      I have tried the toast also and I like your poetry. I didn't know you wrote poetry.

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      mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

      Very interesting Greek One. Add the part about Paris Hilton in comments, eh? I'm interested in seeing it.

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      Leni Sands 6 years ago from UK

      Truely inspirational Greek One. My first visit to Paris was on reading this poem. Thank you.

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