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Rain From The Sky

Updated on December 4, 2016

Wanting to feel loved

Like rain from the sky

Wants to kiss earth


Wanting to feel your faithfulness

Like rain from the sky

Promises life to those of us who breath

And shake in the wind


Wanted to feel anything

Like rain from a dry sky

Falling down on a thirsty world

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      Kenneth Avery 8 months ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      Your poetry is so honest, warm and painful in the context that it moves my heart in memories that I thought were dead.

      Your verse structure is perfect.

      I love most poetry, but abstract/prose is my where I am now.

      "Flickr'd Flame," is just one of my works that I would be honored for you to read and give me feedback.

      Do keep up the fine work.

      Peace.

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      DREAM ON 9 months ago

      You enjoy writing there is another thing in common. Life is about finding the things that make us happy. Along the way you may struggle, work hard and sometimes suffer loss. I honestly believe all the good and great times far out way any problems that might come our way.Keep writing and sharing so everyone can enjoy your passion. Have an awesome Wednesday. Then on Thursday try the make it even better.

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      T S Sky 11 months ago from Saint Louis, MO.

      Thank you Dream On. I also love the rain. It's super awesome we have somethings in common. :)

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      DREAM ON 11 months ago

      I enjoy poetry because it doesn't affend anyone because you can interpret each line many ways. I like to try to think what the poet was thinking and then I like to think what I would like it to be. In your poem I can see how the rain hits the ground and is trying to get the attention of the dirt.I love the rain. It refreshes me and brings me closer to the earth.

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      T S Sky 11 months ago from Saint Louis, MO.

      Thank you Shyron! xoxo

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      Shyron E Shenko 11 months ago from Texas

      Theresa, all poems are great when written from the heart.

      I love poems and Eric is right you could write for the Creative Exiles, and their writers were once and still are Hubbers, but I hope that you stick with HubPages, I don't know that HP appreciates Poetry, but I intend to continue to write poems for HP.

      Blessings my friend.

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      T S Sky 11 months ago from Saint Louis, MO.

      Thank you!

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      Eric Dierker 11 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Hey do not be so shy!! You did not include Awesome in your poll. I don't know squat about poetry -- but I darn sure know what I like. May I suggest a sojourn over to Creative Exiles. You will like the people. And I am sure they will like you.