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Rainy Morning

Updated on June 12, 2009

Subdued walking bundled in hood and cap

Beneath drooping trees of happy greenness

Rivulets running downhill underfoot

Rain's rush hushing earthward at an angle

Few wait for the trolley at six on a Friday

Three's a crowd at the trolley shelter

Trolley takes its time

Out of the rain into the hole

Fifteen minutes and three miles later

I climb the stairs out to Copley Square

Sidewalks puddled construction obstructed

Wet everywhere including the air

Every step I take is Kung Fu balance

My next move like a knife in my pocket

I never forget this is the city

Because I am not a target pal

It occurs to me that these mocassins

Are just not waterproof anymore

In the station closed convenience store

Saves me from the lottery today

Avoiding the homeless I descend

Catch the train and pretend

To ride to where there is no more rain

Deserted former industrial park

Puddles and idle construction machines

Empty acres that were to be a mall

Mile of chain link fence beneath gray sky

Half-torn-up parking lot and a line of pines

Beyond the tracks is a wildlife preserve

Where presumably there is wildlife to observe

Be nice to take the day and do that

Arriving at work hang my wet jacket and hat

Coffee and oat meal in the same cup

At different times

Friday, Rover

Day of waiting to be over

Rain and train and home

Monday do it all again

Maybe rain, too, then

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    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      8 years ago from United States

      Thank you for bringing me back here. :)

    • Peggy W profile image

      Peggy Woods 

      8 years ago from Houston, Texas

      You certainly painted a wet and soggy picture with your words of that particular workday in the rain. Almost felt as though I should grab an umbrella! Well done!

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thank you, Ms. Behavior. I don't mind the rain so much. It's work that bothers me! LOL

    • Randy Behavior profile image

      Randy Behavior 

      9 years ago from Near the Ocean

      What a lovely moody piece. It made me cozy, but then I like the rain, I sense from this that you don't, so much. Lovely poem Tom.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Glad you like, AIDY!

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      Am I dead, yet? 

      9 years ago

      I agree with Cris, it was as if reading a scripted scene. It is just that, the monotonous of life. Just moving about is almost like moving without thinking sometimes. Knowing the same thing will happen next Monday. I enjoyed this one as well, Tom.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thanks, Chris!

    • Cris A profile image

      Cris A 

      9 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Nice one! So atmospheric and vivid, it was like wacthing a snippet from a movie! :D

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      I wish I had known, Frieda, I would have bought you a coffee. Thank you

    • Frieda Babbley profile image

      Frieda Babbley 

      9 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

      I always look forward to your poems, Tom. This is definitely a favorite! I quite enjoyed my morning walk in the rain with you. Loved the images! Glad you're over your writers block =D

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thanks, Kushal, for joining me on this rainy morning.

    • Kushal Poddar profile image

      Kushal Poddar 

      9 years ago from Kolkata,India

      "Three's a crowd at the trolley shelter" you can choose few words and take us through a journey of life. Great.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thanks, Shibashake. It's nice to have a couple days off. A romantic comedy sounds good!

    • shibashake profile image

      shibashake 

      9 years ago

      Wow Tom - great imagery. Hope you have a very relaxing weekend with lots of cuddles and romantic comedies :)

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thanks, Amanda! I will check it out.

      Thank you, Candie, for the great compliments.

      Thanks, JJ, glad you liked!

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      JJ (pachuca213) 

      9 years ago

      I truly loved this....it was very descriptive and lovely!

    • Candie V profile image

      Candie V 

      9 years ago from Whereever there's wolves!! And Bikers!! Cummon Flash, We need an adventure!

      Felt so trapped and hopeless. Desire to fly, but wet mocassins keeping reality in front of my eyes. Tom, you painted me a great picture today. Thank you!

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      Amanda Severn 

      9 years ago from UK

      This isn't the exact one I had in mind, but it has a similar feel;

      http://images.bridgeman.co.uk/cgi-bin/bridgemanIma...

      I like Ruskin Spear. He paints things as they are, warts and all.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thanks, so much, Amanda! Yes, I definitely need new moccassins. Is there somewhere online to see Ruskin Spear's painting?

    • Amanda Severn profile image

      Amanda Severn 

      9 years ago from UK

      Tom, get new moccasins! This is a picture in words. It puts me in mind of a painting by Ruskin Spear I once saw, of a rainy, misty beach. Life's not perfect. Sometimes it's boring, repetitive, disappointing, damp. But it's still life, and it's still worth celebrating, and this poem does that beautifully.

    • Tom Rubenoff profile imageAUTHOR

      Tom rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      Thank you Cindy!

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      Cindy Vine 

      9 years ago from Cape Town

      Excellent poem as always, Tom!

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