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Death Poetry: Rapid Heart Be Still

Updated on June 10, 2013

I walk towards the light,
But it moves farther away.
Darkness begins to surround
Total state of dismay.

So close to coming home
My calling not yet fulfilled.
So close to the rapture
Rapid heart be still

I am still needed
My weary feet must walk again
How much more can be endured
When I yearn for the end.

I will walk
I will fulfill his will
I will endure
Rapid heart be still

One day he will call
One day my pain will end
One day I will live in rapture
Never to walk again

Rapid heart be still
It is not time my time
There is a reason
There is a rhyme.

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      sarah546 4 years ago from Genesee County, MI, United States

      I really enjoyed reading this, you have true talent!

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!! Very emotional and excellently written!!!

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thank you. I appreciate that.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      I definitely voted up. That is another fantastic one. You should be proud of yourself.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Well done. Congratulations

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      A very good statement and heartfelt. Nice job.

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Would poem , I love it.

      Vote up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Midnight Lights 4 years ago from USA

      Awesome! haha I wonder where you get the inspiration sometimes.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thank you everyone, this particular poem was my thoughts from my car accident two days ago.

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      Ann-Christin 4 years ago from UK

      Wow this is a really awesome poem. I hope you are okay after your car accident.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I'm doing good.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      PHILLYDREAMER...enjoyed the hub..thanks for sharing a personal moment in your life...strange how we realize how precious life is when we think the end is near..wow..what a wake-up call...you are being given another chance at getting your life right...glad you're doing ok my friend....

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