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Raw Love
I taste her
Saltiness on my lips
On my tongue
I am overwhelmed
By her scent
Woman’s aroma
Feminine musk
Deep perfume
My blood pounds
Through my body
Like warm whiskey
Flowing through my veins
Humming in my eardrums
My fingertips hoover
Over her skin
Gently
Softly
A Man’s struggle
Fighting urgency
To grasp
To thrust
But control’s
Tenderly
Lightly
Educing a tremble
Animal instinct
Human desire
I witness the eclipse
Within her eyes
From guarded restraint
To unbearable want
Exquisitely undress her
Silk sliding
Over goose bumps
I fight the impatience
But it is difficult
Hard
So very hard
We love
Tender, rough
Fast, slow
Scream, laugh
Claw, caress
And the war is over
We lick our wounds
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: ) Glad I could help! Thanks again Paula.
Wayne! I knew it! I TOLD my Dr. I didn't need those nasty hormone replacements.......I'll bring her a copy of your work, so she understands. LOL........Bravo! form an old gal who had nearly forgotten. ...sigh....
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Thanks again faith. So I went from a comment about weeping to this. Lol. I'm glad it tickled your fancy : )
Pretty raw love there . . . whew!!! That pretty much describes it so well!
Very steamy and I am spent just from reading it! LOL
Voted up ++++ Faith Reaper
Great poem here about fantastic love and skillfully played out, this is the best and erotic as well, "Oh my ,,,,Ohhhhh myyyyyy" Whew! :-) :PPP
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: ) Thank you, James.
I like this kind of wars even if It takes me muscles and guts and every penny lol
Voted up.It is a lovely, beautiful and wellpenned poem!
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Thank you very much, Marie.
Wow Wayne. What a poignant piece. I am breathless just reading it. Nice work.
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Thanks, Ed!
You absolutely Nailed it my man ! Amazing !
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Thank you, Audrey!
I loved the metaphor here--clearly war and love are two sides of the same coin
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Frank: Thank you very much for the read. I have been checking out your work and it's a pleasure to hear from you.
cloud nine my friend..cloud 9 LOL great stuff
That what she said one time to me - hey buddy that's a nice pencil you have there.
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: ) Thank you, Colin. Glad I could warm up a fellow passion penciler up there in the North Lands!
Hello Mister Erotica - I just had a cigarette and I don't even smoke.
Well I am sure if enough ladies in Hubtown see and read these words they won't have to be faking anything - anymore , lol.
Oh God this is good - just like the real thing.
Sending you breathlessly my good wishes from Colin who the last time he had a taste of it - Ronald Reagan was your president. lol
lake erie time 6:43pm
'A man's struggle'...
yum, yum - i want sum...
absolutely delicious, Wayne - now - i think it's time for a cigarette...(LOL)..
voting and sharing..
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Thank you very much, Deb. I'm glad you came back after the troubles we all had this morning.
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Its just this Florida Humidity ( :
NOW I can fine comment on this, like I tried to do earlier when comments were down. Your sense of self is most apparent in this piece, along with your honesty and sense of time. This was beautifully done.
Who turned off the air conditioner?! *fans self*
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Mr. White! Its always a privilege!
Wayne,
great job on the poem. very vivid and well detailed. great job. voted up.
I. white
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I almost titled it "Make Love Not War" after the old saying.
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It doesn't hurt to dream!
No really Wayne, thank you ;-) tee hee hee
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Thank you, Cat ( :
Voted up and awesome. Love war nothing like it.
If only all wars could be the same!
Wayne,
Wow, is this powerful or what?! Like putty Wayne, you’ve got me like putty. ;-)
Cat
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Sometimes speechless is a compliment. Two oh my's are good :-)
Oh my...wow! Sorry, I am not more eloquent on this one. All I can say is....oh my!
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