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Reflecting Pools (tanka)

Updated on December 17, 2015

Two men sit alone

Reflecting upon the past

In pools at their feet

One cries over all the dids

The other of the did nots


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      Chitrangada Sharan 2 years ago from New Delhi, India

      A lot has been expressed in few lines here- Nice Tanka!

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      Linda Crampton 2 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is so sad. It's a lovely poem, though.

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      Pearl Sepuya 2 years ago

      Do the things you need to do now...never wait because tomorrow may never come. So true what they say.

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Regret is a bitter pill to swallow.

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