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Rictameter poetry for Valentine Day

Updated on February 13, 2014
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I am a writer of poetry and fiction. I especially love flash fiction. My name is Ruby, and I live in Southern Illinois. I am a retired R.N.

First kiss

Expermental

Anxiously awaiting

Antipiation expanding

Fluttering heart-beat tingling sensation

Complection ruddy glittering

Moist lips pursed eagerly

Embracing arms

First kiss.

Embracing arms.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello rebeccamealey. Thank you for the romantic ditty comment, Cheers...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello joedolphin. So sorry i missed your comment. Thank you for the sweet comment...

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      Rebecca Mealey 3 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Cut little romantic diddy!

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      Joe 3 years ago from north miami FL

      Short and sweet really nice poem

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hi Susan, thank you for the beautiful creation comment...Cheers..

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      Susan 3 years ago from India

      Beautiful creation always exploring. Voted up.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello DDE, nice to see you. Thank you for the cuddly and sweet comment. Cheers..

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Rictameter poetry for Valentine Day hmm very cuddly and sweet.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hi Martie, ah young love, so innocent!, then comes reality, love hurts sometime. We've both been there, done that, now we roll with the flow. Hope you are feeling better my twin! Hugs and blessings..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Rasma, so happy you enjoyed. Thank you for a sweet comment.

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      Martie Coetser 3 years ago from South Africa

      Oh, this is an awesome description of a first kiss, Ruby! I love the song 'Young Love'. Makes me so sad because this phase comes only once and so often, for too many, it gets spoiled by one or the other selfish, shallow idiot :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Sweet real sweet Love that song.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello epbooks, nice to see you again. Thank you for the sweet comment..

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      Elizabeth Parker 3 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

      How very sweet!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Nell. Me too! Whoo Hoo..Thank you. Aren't memories wonderful? Cheers my friend..

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      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      Oh I remember it well Ruby! lol! love the poem, it brought back memories!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello girishpuri, Happy to see you again. Thank you my friend...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Vellur, Thank you for the lovely, sweet comment...

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      Girish puri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Happy valentine day, friend

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      A lovely, sweet poem for Valentine's Day.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Mike, I forgive you. Hee..Soft, sweet and tender what more could i ask for? Thank you my friend. I'll be over for a bear claw and coffee soon.

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      mckbirdbks 3 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Ruby, Your poetry is beautiful, what a fine sentiment you attend to here, both soft and sweet and tender. Happy Valentine's day. I know, I know, I'm late.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello vocalcoach, your comment made me laugh. I can relate about the cousin. Hee...Thank you so much for your complementary comment.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Frank, It's a pleasure to see you on my page. Thank you for a great comment..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Lesley, I am always glad to see you, being late is not a crime, i know how busy you are. Happy it took you back to memories of lan...Wishing you much success with your book. Thank you for coming by and for sharing...Hugs..xx.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Susan, so happy to see you. Thank you for a fantastic comment. I hope you are well and writing again....

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Oh Ruby, how I love your poem. It took me back to a time when I was very young, experimenting with kissing. My poor defenseless cousin helped me out.

      You have such a gift. Thank you ~ Audrey

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      this was just great... loved it

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      MMMMWAH! Wet, messy, queazy, terrified? Hey - the truth's the truth..

      But seriously..this was sweet and adorable - it definitely took me back..

      His name was Ian...(mmmmmmm....lol)

      Sorry i'm late, but - i've been in the DUNGEON - try to get mastered published. I swear, i need a TEAM of peeps! lol...(Or...a sugar daddy! haha) It was supposed to be done today, but guess what? It's not! Tomorrow - if it kills me! lol.

      hugs and sharingxx

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      Susan Zutautas 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Ruby, Fantastic Rictameter!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Ruchira, I have missed you. Happy to see you. Thank you for the beautiful comment.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Genna. I love to write and read rictameter poetry. I think Docmo wrote the first one that inspired me to attempt to write this style. Thank you so much for kind words and sharing...Hugs..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Jodah, I agree. The first kiss is special. Thank you for reading and commenting...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Peg, So nice to see you. Happy you enjoyed. It's difficult to feel romantic when the snow is piled high, although i guess it would be nice to cuddle under the blankets, Hee.Thank you..

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello sweethearts, How sweet, you still remember! Thank you so much..

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      Ruchira 3 years ago from United States

      This was beautiful Ruby.

      Happy Valentine, my friend!

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      Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      This is a lovely poem for Valentine’s Day, Ruby…perfect! I love how you write rictameter…this isn’t an easy style of poetry to write. Happy Valentine's Day. Voted up and sharing. :-)

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      What a wonderful Valentine's Day poem...nothing better than the first kiss.

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      Peg Cole 3 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Perfectly delightful for this wonderful Valentines day. Hoping you had a fun filled and romantic day, Ruby. I loved this sweet poem.

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      sweethearts2 3 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Anticipation of that first kiss - I still remember. Thanks for the reminder

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello manatita, Nice to meet you. Thank you for a cool comment...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Graham, I'm so glad this brought back memories. Thank you for supporting my poetry. I appreciate you.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello tobusiness, I do too, aren't memories sweet? Thank you for a beautifully done comment...

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Cool. Nice memories.

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      Graham Lee 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Ruby. A lovely hub as usual. The video 'Young Love'

      I remember it so well. It truly brings back memories for me. Brilliant.

      Graham.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Oh yes...I remember it well! Beautifully done. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Audrey, I love doing Rictameter poetry, so glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the well done comment...

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Bill, I must confess, i am a hopeless romantic. Valentine Day is special. My son called today and said that he bought roses, candy and a lovely card for his wife Janie. I told him he was a special man. Thank you Bill, love your comment...

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      So sweet and tender Ruby! Well done!

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      There is nothing like that first kiss, is there Ruby? Such sweet anticipation and heavenly results. :) Well done my romantic friend.