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Rising From the Depths of Darkness

Updated on March 25, 2013
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I am rising above

From your hate

Your hell can't trap me anymore

The chains of your deceit

Cannot hold me down

I can't stand this feeling inside

Your words

Your thoughts

Don't make sense to me anymore

Who do you think you are

You ride with your many masks

Deceiving the crowd

A jokester

A sinner

Makes you so damn proud

Taking control

You think you're always right

Beating everyone down in your spite

I will fight you till death

With my sharp sword

You pierced me enough

With your dark words

You saw me as worthless

Another face in the crowd

You didn't see the real me inside

You are so shallow

How dare you violate

With your toxic cruelty

You are satan reincaranate

Pretending humility

I will rise from the darkness

You left me in

You will see

In the end

It will all be alright

Being set free

Released from this nightmare

I will finally have my sight

I will be here just with me

My wings to take flight


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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Raciniwa. :)

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      7 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, so powerful blows me off...

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Hi Mark thank you!

      @ Hi Debbie thank you so much!

      @ Aim lol thanks!

      @ Perspy thank you very much!

      @ Billy thank you very much!

      @ XStatic thank you very much!

      @ Jim thank you!

      @ Ruby thank you!

      @ DF thank you!

      @Sminut thank you!

      @ Gypsy lol someone like that. Thank you!

      @ Frank thank you!

      @ Katrine thank you!

      @ Swb thank you!

      @ Cheryl thank you!

      @ Gail thank you!

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      Gail Louise Stevenson 

      7 years ago from Mason City

      Really great poem-makes perfect sense. Satan is arogant and very evil. Breaking free from the devil is freedom from evil. A lot of people are so self centered and self serving which is a very bad way to be. Conceited people aren't very nice at all. Great hub.

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      Cheryl Simonds 

      7 years ago from Connecticut

      I can feel the hurt, been there, done that. I hope you are no longer there.

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      Scott Biddulph 

      7 years ago from Gainesville Georgia

      I loved the poem. It reminds me of a marriage I was in at one time *laughing*. No,in reality, I saw it as a voice of one who escaped the wrath of Hell. Voted up and interesting. WP

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      7 years ago

      Caroline, great poem. Try to stay away from 'manipulators'. Some people are just so self-centered and careless. Nothing good or positive can ever come out from such behaviour.

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      Frank Atanacio 

      7 years ago from Shelton

      Caroline.. I loved it..:)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      7 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Super! Voted up and awesome. Powerful stuff Caroline. You wouldn't be talking about a dude with the last name of Dracula would you? Were he mortal you'd have killed him with your words alone. Loved this.

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      7 years ago from singapore

      the title is really catchy, the picture is amazing, it catches my attention immediately and the words are so powerful. great hub

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      7 years ago from Las Vegas

      Dark word can be devastating, and they do have the piercing strength of a sword as you skillfully demonstrated in the verse of this searing poem—well done.


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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is super charged! You go girl..

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      James W. Nelson 

      7 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Caroline, I have to agree with Xstatic--Great job!

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      Jim Higgins 

      7 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      The target of this one got singed, flamed, burned out!

      Great writing!

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      Bill Holland 

      7 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I hadn't planned on reading any more hubs until I saw your name pop up...glad I did. This is powerful and the emotions just ooze from the screen. Excellent work!

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      Demas W Jasper 

      7 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Reading you regularly and it only gets better.

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      Daniel Austhof 

      7 years ago from West Michigan

      Daaam! Thats what I'm talking about! This could NOT BE any stronger! (but how do you really feel? ;) ...great Caroline!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      7 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Wow...caroline..awesome..i feel like telling a few people this myself..great poem...voted up debbie

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      7 years ago

      Ooo, I feel the power in those words, great hub and fantastic poem, voted up!


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