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Rising From the Depths of Darkness
I am rising above
From your hate
Your hell can't trap me anymore
The chains of your deceit
Cannot hold me down
I can't stand this feeling inside
Your words
Your thoughts
Don't make sense to me anymore
Who do you think you are
You ride with your many masks
Deceiving the crowd
A jokester
A sinner
Makes you so damn proud
Taking control
You think you're always right
Beating everyone down in your spite
I will fight you till death
With my sharp sword
You pierced me enough
With your dark words
You saw me as worthless
Another face in the crowd
You didn't see the real me inside
You are so shallow
How dare you violate
With your toxic cruelty
You are satan reincaranate
Pretending humility
I will rise from the darkness
You left me in
You will see
In the end
It will all be alright
Being set free
Released from this nightmare
I will finally have my sight
I will be here just with me
My wings to take flight
Comments
Ooo, I feel the power in those words, great hub and fantastic poem, voted up!
Wow...caroline..awesome..i feel like telling a few people this myself..great poem...voted up debbie
Daaam! Thats what I'm talking about! This could NOT BE any stronger! (but how do you really feel? ;) ...great Caroline!
Reading you regularly and it only gets better.
I hadn't planned on reading any more hubs until I saw your name pop up...glad I did. This is powerful and the emotions just ooze from the screen. Excellent work!
The target of this one got singed, flamed, burned out!
Great writing!
Caroline, I have to agree with Xstatic--Great job!
This is super charged! You go girl..
Dark word can be devastating, and they do have the piercing strength of a sword as you skillfully demonstrated in the verse of this searing poem—well done.
DF
the title is really catchy, the picture is amazing, it catches my attention immediately and the words are so powerful. great hub
Super! Voted up and awesome. Powerful stuff Caroline. You wouldn't be talking about a dude with the last name of Dracula would you? Were he mortal you'd have killed him with your words alone. Loved this.
Caroline.. I loved it..:)
Caroline, great poem. Try to stay away from 'manipulators'. Some people are just so self-centered and careless. Nothing good or positive can ever come out from such behaviour.
I loved the poem. It reminds me of a marriage I was in at one time *laughing*. No,in reality, I saw it as a voice of one who escaped the wrath of Hell. Voted up and interesting. WP
I can feel the hurt, been there, done that. I hope you are no longer there.
Really great poem-makes perfect sense. Satan is arogant and very evil. Breaking free from the devil is freedom from evil. A lot of people are so self centered and self serving which is a very bad way to be. Conceited people aren't very nice at all. Great hub.
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@ Hi Mark thank you!
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oh, so powerful emotions...it blows me off...
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Thank you Raciniwa. :)
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