Roller Coaster of Fate

Life's sad roller coaster zigzagging all over your life. I know what you mean, sometimes I want to get off this crazy ride.

Well done Wayne.

Nice work,Wayne. I love the way you weave personal tragedy into the overall ups and downs of life. It sends the message that none of us are immune in this life. ~WB

So nice looks like you have poetry talent all over the place....Great poem...nice I love it!

Oh, Wayne...how cruel life can be! What good is the roller coaster of life with no one to share it with???

Please don't stop the ride and want to get off - who knows what's around the next heart-stopping plunge!

you are just the most gorgeous poet, my friend! I FELT this deeply!

sharing

Wayne,

You create so many beautiful images and your transitions are right on.

Love this poem!

Voted Up and Awesome!

Best Always,

Kim

Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful sentiments wanting someone you love to be there at the end of the roller coaster ride of life. Enjoyed. Passing this on.

The depth of love is an amazing thing. It can allow us the laughter as well as life's tears. It can be so strong and deep the the death also cause the living death of the survivor. The anguish is real and the pain in its throes is mindful of the essence of your grief...

Your welcome :-) sorry its taking me so long to catch up on your work, hubpages doesn't work very well on my phone. I downloaded the Chrome app so it works a little better now. I even got to share something new of mine last night which I haven't been able to do in a long time.

Well both the visual effect and the writing were excellent.

You really captured the emotions of life's spiking path.

Great work, voted up. Anna

Isn't that how it so often is? Life is a roller coaster ride and love quite often is! We want the ride to stop and yet we don't. Your poem took the reader through the highs and lows leaving them breathless. The formatting didn't go unnoticed either. Well done!

I definitely felt a roller coaster of emotions as i read this, it's so beautiful yet so sad. i love this!

Ah the roller coaster of life and death passing. So sweet yet so bitter is this pill we have to bare when or time is nigh. In this piece you expressed your love, loss and emptiness all in one. Like the petals of a dying rose, the seed will replant itself firmly and with the help of the prickly thorn it will grow again and be plucked by lovers so true.

The sad part about death is leaving the ones we love here on earth, yet knowing that what waits beyond the grave is continuity, the road still winds, its not over, we simply are on another journey my friend. Let your heart be strong, press on towards the mark. Rated up and shared.

whoa this poem is a roller coaster ride.. i find if my life goes up and down ..it's adventure.. battle, drama everything one needs to say damn life was good.. Love it bro :)

I can feel the heart wrenching pain in your words. This is very sad, Wayne, but so beautifully written.

Yes, one moment we are high on that mountain top, then suddenly we are falling down into that deep, dark valley . . . than here we go again back up to the top of that mountain . . .

Roller coaster indeed! C'est la vie!

Voted up +++ and sharing

Blessings, Faith Reaper

This was such a sad and beautiful poem. This was definitely a roller coaster of emotions alright. Voted it up!

Wayne,

I don't know if I find this more beautiful or sad. '...in your air of I love you scent...', wow, I loved that! Don't we all ride the roller coaster? The lows make the highs all the better, while the highs can be snagged away in an instant by the lowest of lows. Just gotta ride with your hands in the air and try to appreciate it all!

Obviously voted up and others ~ sharing too!

Cat