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Romantic Poem: Haiku-style

Updated on November 12, 2012

A poetic expression of the meeting and parting of lovers. Start with the first and read to the third. Or start with the third and read to the second... It is a circular poem. No beginning or end, only continuous meeting and parting.

Loveliness lingers
in that place you were resting.
World calls you away

Empty sheets await
hungry, passionate lovers.
Hearts beat. Limbs entwined.

Star-filled sky. Moonlight
and shadows on satin sheets.
Golden beam of dawn.



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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Laurinzo - thank you. I had great inspiration for this one. It means so much to me when my efforts are well received. It encourages me to write more. Hope you like what it so come.

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      This is a very roamntic and sexy hub. In the haiku style too; very well done!

      Keep this up Dana

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      IntegrityYes - thank you! these pesky things just seem to pop up out of nowhere.

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      WHOO! That is wonderful.

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Olde Cashmere - thank you so much for you generous votes and comment. It give me such satisfaction to know my work is enjoyed..... always nice to see you visit. See you around the hubs.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago

      I love creating Haiku poems and this is beautiful DanaTeresa. I enjoy the idea of how it is circular, very creative and interesting writing. I'm voting this up and rating it beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Docmo - What a beautiful compliment... "captured in little poetic nuggets" - that made me smile. It's just how I think of Haiku.... These came from what you recently posted on facebook. Something about the haiku and the image left me with a feeling that I had to "answer". And this is the result. My utmost gratitude for the appreciation, and the kind words. (if there is a hub of yours i can link to, let me know)

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      Beautifully done. The emotion of love and absence captured in little poetic nuggets. Circularity is an added bonus to these wonderful haikus. Glad I posted mine, Dana, these were born from the crumpled sheets? Well done. beautiful.

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Mhatter99 - thanks forstopping by, always nice to see you. :)

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      good work. nice trilogy. one flows into the next.

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      teaches - thank you. just what i was going for. nice to know it came through.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Very expressive on the heart's desire and waiting for the moment to continue a true love.

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      LINDA / VICKI / JOSH.... Thanks guys. I'm glad you like this. It was another one of my write and publish in 30 minutes or less so I can go to bed ordeals :)

      Love makes the world go 'round, and makes this poem go 'round! :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania


      I enjoyed this haiku, clever job with the circle maneuver! Great job, keep them coming! :)

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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Very nice! I, too, like being able to start anywhere! Beautiful poem!

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      Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Awesome haiku Dana! I like the clever circle! Well done!

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Hi Bill- seems you have gone from fashionably late on commenting to lightning speed

      Glad you appreciate the "optional starting points". I have churned out enough haiku-style work that I thought it was time to up my game with something a little different.

      This is another darn thing that popped up just around bedtime. I may be short on sleep tomorrow, but I think for good reason. :)

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very nice Dana! I love being given the choice to start at the third pleases my sense of abnormal. :)


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