Romantic Poem: Haiku-style
A poetic expression of the meeting and parting of lovers. Start with the first and read to the third. Or start with the third and read to the second... It is a circular poem. No beginning or end, only continuous meeting and parting.
Loveliness lingers
in that place you were resting.
World calls you away
Empty sheets await
hungry, passionate lovers.
Hearts beat. Limbs entwined.
Star-filled sky. Moonlight
and shadows on satin sheets.
Golden beam of dawn.
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- Without A Touch - poem
(Begin the video first. The intrumental intro will give you plenty of time to read my work before enjoying one of my favorite songs of passionate love) ~~~~~~~~~ Do you believe in love at first sight? What about first word, first sound,... - A romantic story part one - The Dinner Date
He leads her to a small table in a quiet restaurant. It is a late hour for dinner and most of the tables are empty. He pulls out her chair. She sits. He sits across from her. The only light is from a few well placed candles. A waiter approaches and,.
Comments
This is a very roamntic and sexy hub. In the haiku style too; very well done!
Keep this up Dana
WHOO! That is wonderful.
I love creating Haiku poems and this is beautiful DanaTeresa. I enjoy the idea of how it is circular, very creative and interesting writing. I'm voting this up and rating it beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)
Beautifully done. The emotion of love and absence captured in little poetic nuggets. Circularity is an added bonus to these wonderful haikus. Glad I posted mine, Dana, these were born from the crumpled sheets? Well done. beautiful.
good work. nice trilogy. one flows into the next.
Very expressive on the heart's desire and waiting for the moment to continue a true love.
Dana,
I enjoyed this haiku, clever job with the circle maneuver! Great job, keep them coming! :)
Very nice! I, too, like being able to start anywhere! Beautiful poem!
Awesome haiku Dana! I like the clever circle! Well done!
Very nice Dana! I love being given the choice to start at the third stanza...it pleases my sense of abnormal. :)
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