To a Heaven Ahead We Stride
To A Heaven Ahead we Stride
Inspirations alive in the making
Allowing feeling but never to find
Sources of love for the taking
Wanting to shine, hiding the time
Desires ahead as to divide
Certain wishes, wishing to belong
To a Heaven ahead we stride
Walking while singing along
A sea under wisdom of me
Dreams of insight to a vision
Still so hard to believe
Thinking, lacking the attention
A hard time of beliefs to follow us on
A destiny to dwell just never to strive upon
© 2010 Dom Shadows
Comments
nicely done my friend
nice
kimberly xo
Yes, I think. I have tried a few times and failed miserably to write sonnets.
I love Shakespeares' sonnets , bring tears to my eyes.
Keep writing, maybe I can learn something from you, 'cos THE BARD ain't getting me anywhere.!!! love, Dim x
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Dim... really? I have only ever wrote 5.. I'm gonna keep writing more though.. You think?
- AUTHOR
Cupid.. of course not I don't mind.. ty
Sonnets are some of my favourite type of poems. This ranks right up there. You're good at this.
Any name you can chose for your poem. I believe that a poem for a poet is not just a few lines.It's a living one, your darling,it would be unjustified to call them by their generic name!
I hope you wouldn't mind my interference.
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You know thats a good question.. I don't really know, my others do. Maybe it's my first one I didn't know what to name it.. We'll call it "Doms Big Moment" -lmao-..ook?
Very nice sonnet! Why don't you give a name?
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