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Seasons Change
The seasons change
The mind
Stays still
Quiet
Just watching
Everything go by
Always turning
Never staying the same
Losing the grip
Something to hold on to
Everything changes
Even
Love
Trying to hold on to
Something
That isn't there
Anymore
Everything has
Turned to black
The leaves fallen
Withered away
Darkness came
Waiting for
The seasons
To change again
The tide to shift
The sun to shine
Warmth and sweetness
To pour over
Again
Comments
- Author
Thank you very much Vincent for stopping by. Your comments are always appreciated. :)
Thank you Elisha. I am glad you liked it. :)
Thank you Shanmarie. :)
Thank you very much Manatita. :)
Sure. Everything changes, but love is as perennial as Truth itself. Nice poem. I get your drift.
Very beautifully spoken. I particularly like the lines about being quiet and just watching.
Wow. That poem really spoke to me. You only used a few words, but it conveyed so much.
The artistry evokes so much from your palette of beautiful colors. I sense the sadness of course in the loss and passing of possibly a loved one, a friend, a lover? The seasons come and go and so do relationships, we simply have to capture each moment they share with us.
Watch the snow melt and leave, the leaves and moods change their color and luster. Yet spring eternal hope to help wash the debris away left by Winter and Fall to bring us into a glorious awakening of summer's heat that will renew our hearts and even find us in love again. Beautifully penned my poet, enjoyed every word and the video matched it perfectly
- Author
Thank you very much Poetic Fool. :)
Wayne thanks for the compliment on turning it into a song. I'd love to hear it. :)
Thank you for your kind words Thost. :)
This is very nice and blue. Good work. V up.
i want to go to my piano now. Can I turn this into a song? Beautiful piece.
Simply lovely, Caroline. The seasons of our lives change just as do the seasons of the year. Cold, dark, lonely times yield in time to the "warmth and sweetness" of summer pouring over as your poem says. The winters only seem to last longer sometimes and we must remind ourselves that the world keeps turning and things will change. Beautiful write. I look forward to reading more from you. Voted up and more.
- Author
Hi Ruby I have missed you and your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Always. :)
Hi Frank thank you for stopping by. I am glad you liked it. :)
Hi Jim thank you for stopping by and for the compliments. I love those movies. That's funny, I have no idea if you'll disappear. I hope not. :)
Hi Stessily you give me the greatest compliments that feed my soul. Thank you my good friend. :)
Hi Gypsy thank you so much for stopping by and your lovely comments. :)
Hi Sue thank you for your lovely words. :)
Hi Caroline,
Simply beautiful!
Voted up +++ and sharing
Voted up and beautiful. Just lovely. Enjoyed. Love the pic and video.
Caroline, You have such a deep, natural artistry within you, and the ease and elegance with which you give expression, through words, sounds, and images (pictured and imagined), to your gifts is awesome.
Appreciatively, Stessily
This is gorgeous, Caroline, I love it! Your seasons picture, your words, and your music. It reminded me, somewhat of the Bourne trilogy, the first and maybe the second movie, the song at the end, the music beat and the voices--Beautiful work!
I see I'm down to level 3 commenter...will I soon just disappear?
Kind of dreary.. sad.. but I like it :)
I am listening to the music on the video as i comment, beautiful. Seasons, we are always waiting for the next to arrive, hoping for a better tomorrow. I love this Caroline..Thank you..
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