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Seasons Change

Updated on June 25, 2013

The seasons change

The mind

Stays still

Quiet

Just watching

Everything go by

Always turning

Never staying the same

Losing the grip

Something to hold on to

Everything changes

Even

Love

Trying to hold on to

Something

That isn't there

Anymore

Everything has

Turned to black

The leaves fallen

Withered away

Darkness came

Waiting for

The seasons

To change again

The tide to shift

The sun to shine

Warmth and sweetness

To pour over

Again

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Vincent for stopping by. Your comments are always appreciated. :)

      Thank you Elisha. I am glad you liked it. :)

      Thank you Shanmarie. :)

      Thank you very much Manatita. :)

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      manatita44 4 years ago from london

      Sure. Everything changes, but love is as perennial as Truth itself. Nice poem. I get your drift.

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      Shannon 4 years ago from Texas

      Very beautifully spoken. I particularly like the lines about being quiet and just watching.

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      Elisha Jachetti 4 years ago

      Wow. That poem really spoke to me. You only used a few words, but it conveyed so much.

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      The artistry evokes so much from your palette of beautiful colors. I sense the sadness of course in the loss and passing of possibly a loved one, a friend, a lover? The seasons come and go and so do relationships, we simply have to capture each moment they share with us.

      Watch the snow melt and leave, the leaves and moods change their color and luster. Yet spring eternal hope to help wash the debris away left by Winter and Fall to bring us into a glorious awakening of summer's heat that will renew our hearts and even find us in love again. Beautifully penned my poet, enjoyed every word and the video matched it perfectly

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Poetic Fool. :)

      Wayne thanks for the compliment on turning it into a song. I'd love to hear it. :)

      Thank you for your kind words Thost. :)

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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      This is very nice and blue. Good work. V up.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      i want to go to my piano now. Can I turn this into a song? Beautiful piece.

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      Poetic Fool 4 years ago

      Simply lovely, Caroline. The seasons of our lives change just as do the seasons of the year. Cold, dark, lonely times yield in time to the "warmth and sweetness" of summer pouring over as your poem says. The winters only seem to last longer sometimes and we must remind ourselves that the world keeps turning and things will change. Beautiful write. I look forward to reading more from you. Voted up and more.

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Ruby I have missed you and your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Always. :)

      Hi Frank thank you for stopping by. I am glad you liked it. :)

      Hi Jim thank you for stopping by and for the compliments. I love those movies. That's funny, I have no idea if you'll disappear. I hope not. :)

      Hi Stessily you give me the greatest compliments that feed my soul. Thank you my good friend. :)

      Hi Gypsy thank you so much for stopping by and your lovely comments. :)

      Hi Sue thank you for your lovely words. :)

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Caroline,

      Simply beautiful!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Just lovely. Enjoyed. Love the pic and video.

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      stessily 4 years ago

      Caroline, You have such a deep, natural artistry within you, and the ease and elegance with which you give expression, through words, sounds, and images (pictured and imagined), to your gifts is awesome.

      Appreciatively, Stessily

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      James W. Nelson 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      This is gorgeous, Caroline, I love it! Your seasons picture, your words, and your music. It reminded me, somewhat of the Bourne trilogy, the first and maybe the second movie, the song at the end, the music beat and the voices--Beautiful work!

      I see I'm down to level 3 commenter...will I soon just disappear?

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Kind of dreary.. sad.. but I like it :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I am listening to the music on the video as i comment, beautiful. Seasons, we are always waiting for the next to arrive, hoping for a better tomorrow. I love this Caroline..Thank you..