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Seduction of Rose

Updated on February 3, 2012

Veils of red

Flowed around her

Rose was thrust in the realm

Of undying seduction

Love and lust entwined

Drowning her passion

Madness of the unknown

Pools went beyond infinity

Which held her there

She loved her world

Where everything had a desire

Enticing serenity

There was nothing that would

Hold her back

From where she was meant to be

Every night had a new name

Every fantasy had a new dream

Opening up new eyes

That only she could see

Black lace and crimson lips

Always with a red rose

Tears she had left behind

Only seduction to be exposed

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      Ghaelach 5 years ago

      Morning Caroline.

      Lovely hub.

      A very sensual lady.

      Take care Caroline.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Hi Caroline, your poems push me towards deeper thinking and imagination. Very interesting, keep up the good work. Voted up :-)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, missed you!!

      But I see your passion for writing great poetry didn't go anywhere. Love the pics too.

      Much Love

      Michael

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Creativity shining through. Voted beautiful.

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      stessily 5 years ago

      Caroline, The complexity which underlies seeming simplicity in your poems and indeed in all your writings here on hubpages plunges deep into the innermost thoughts, dreams, and heartbeats of your portraits. Sensitivity to nuance is evinced in this poem, as in all of your other poetic journeys.

      Someone who is misunderstood or is disdained would find favor in words from you, for you convey the fragility which dwells in everyone and the silence of unspoken dreams and emotions in and between each word you select.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Caroline..Seduction, fantasy..You captured it all.. Thank you...

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      The Fastionista 5 years ago

      I love how fearless you are, Caroline! Beautiful poem - I especially love the colors you have going on - red, black, crimson - so indicative of the sensuality and seduction going on. Very nicely done - voted up and beautiful!

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      seductive indeed...i love your play of words here Caroline...she's a temptress no matter what...

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Black, red, a rose, poetry and a scantily-clad woman--can't get any better than that! Beautiful work, Caroline! Especially those photos you chose: I love plenty left for the imagination, and you provided it. I will probably come back to those two sensual pics again and again!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Caroline this is my kind of poetry and you do it so well. you are so talented.. how you make me feel and draw me in to a sweet seduction.

      Thank you

      Blessing

      Debbie

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Ghaelach thank you! Always good to see you! I'm glad you liked it.

      @ Katrine thank you for the vote and read! :)

      @ Hi Michael missed you too! Will be visiting your page soon. Hope you have some new poems! :)

      @ Gypsy thank you so much!

      @ Stessily wow your comments always inspire me to write more! LOL. You are my hub mom and art critic! I love your comments and your style!

      @ Always thank you for your great constant support!

      @ The Fashionista thank you! You're I love your fearlessness as well. lol.

      @ Raciniwa thank you so much dear lady. :)

      @ SubRon7 LOL I am glad you like the pictures and my poem. Always good to see you!

      @ Debbie hello sweet lady thank you for the compliments! Coming from a talented lady such as yourself!

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Great work here caroline; I loved it and here's to so many more to share on here.

      Take care

      Eddy.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      How did I ever miss this one , you went sneaking behind me , to deliver? Lol.

      Great words of description, dear Caroline, what made me see this one I was coming to say to you duty calls , and though because I heard of your desire , I thought I did . So I was letting you know that you are missed. But we will wait, once duty calls. Be well!

      Bless.

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      Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

      Sweet Seduction! I love it!

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Caroline

      "Black lace and crimson lips" Seduction accomplished.

      Voted up and away!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Eddy thank you for stopping by and reading! Always good to see you!

      @ Sky thank you for the kind thoughts. Miss ya too! I've been sick with a cold lately and taking a break from all of this and work. I will be back to check on what you have new going on. :)

      @ Dexter thank you!

      @ Sueswan thank you very much! Glad you liked it!

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      echoe0021 5 years ago from Conway, AR

      Enticing, very good depiction of sensuality.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thanks Echoe glad you liked it.

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      Neil Sperling 5 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      Unfolding beauty.. {{--0--}}

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