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Seeking Perfection

Updated on November 6, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

We are all looking for that peace

That to make us whole

Perfection

Beauty

Trying to seek

Control

Where we will look least

We will find

In the dark corners

Of our minds

Beyond the scraps

The tattered veil

There lies the all

To which we prevail

Among the piles of dirt

That which we see

Lies in plain sight

Our beauty

Don't be afraid

Of what you will find

You might be surprised

What trails behind



"The appearance of things changes according to the emotions, and thus we see magic and beauty in them, while the magic and beauty are really in ourselves." —Kahlil Gibran

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago

      Thank you Valleypoet. :)

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Sometimes, the searching for what is authentic in us is quite a journey...enjoyed this, thank you:-))

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago

      Thanks Mary that's such a sweet compliment. :)

      Thanks Teaches for stopping by! :)

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Very true. We must not be afraid to look beyond what we see, we may be surprised.

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      Mary Hyatt 4 years ago from Florida

      Lovely poem here. I wish I could write poetry like this!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Cyndi ! :)

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      Cynthia B Turner 5 years ago from Georgia

      So nice! Loved it.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Astra thank you for reading and commenting. :)

      Hi Leslie I love the Dalai Lama quote! You are awesome. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

      Hi Alur thank you for your inspiration and for stopping by. :)

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      ALUR 5 years ago from USA

      Ah, it is purity and contentment I seek: perhaps the imperfect is the PERFECT. And Khalil Gibran is my own muse as I write and attempt to relate to life and finding the beauty in what I do, how I speak and how I live...

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Wow...awesome message, Caroline!

      There is nothing wrong with seeking perfection within ourselves - as long as we never believe we have found it!

      The Dahli Lama said almost the same thing: (paraphrasing, of course): Don't be afraid of your light - it is your responsibility to fan it and keep it bright!

      Loved this, dear..

      sharing forward

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Yes, sometimes our most obvious beauty or the beauty we seek in others is right there for all to see. We don't see perfection. We seek the heart that mirrors what we feel and how we feel it... all loves have their own different perfections somehow... our hearts tell us.

      This is a wonderful hub, Caroline. Thank you for this. :)

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Hi Crissp thank you for stopping by. :)

      @ Hi Gypsy thank you for stopping by and commenting. :)

      @ Hi Don sure go ahead and put it on facebook if you want. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :)

      @ Hi Ruby thank you for stopping by my friend. Cheers. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful! Loved it..

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      Donald Tomberlin 5 years ago from Stroudsburg

      Shining, shimmering poem. I agree with CrisSp about embracing our imperfections. Can I share it to my Facebook profile? If you don't mind. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. A really nice poem. In this world of ours I think it might be a very difficult if not impossible task to find perfection. Better to look for the perfection in our selves and inner beauty.

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      CrisSp 5 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Nicely penned and I like the quote from Kahlil Gibran, which is oh, so true on depicting our inner beauty.

      Embracing imperfection!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      @ Hi Frank thank you. :)

      @ Hi Shining thank you. :)

      @ Hi Eric thank you. :)

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      Eric Dierker 5 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      A peaceful easy feeling, thank you

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Beautiful and uplifting ode reminding us of our own inner beautiful light.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      caroline wow.. I loved it period....

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Myriad. :)

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      Myriad 5 years ago from the bottom of your heart .. ie chennai!

      Very nice one :) Keep it up