Senryu poetry, falling leaves

Fall is so inspiring when it comes to poetry. Nice job.

I remember raking those mounds of leaves. It is a bit sad when the color fades and the winds blow the leaves away. Lovely poetry.

Ruby, I've used this method of ridding my lawn of leaves on quite a few occasions. Very well done poetry.

Autumn says goodbye to summer and welcomes winter. A beautiful way to connect the seasons. The variety of stunning leaves falling from trees becomes one of nature's most beautiful shows.

Love your poetry Ruby. Votes up and sharing.

Audrey

Wonderful, refreshing and soothing too, like a balm of light.

Beautifully written. I just raked all my leaves. Glad Spring is here.

One of my favorite subjects Ruby--these are really beautiful!

Beautiful Senryu my friend. I could just see the fall sights in your words. You are a master of words.

This is beautiful! Such a lovely descriptive poem! I voted up, thanks for sharing!

Beautiful and perfect, Ruby. Thumbs up for you. Cheers :-)

Beautiful, Ruby! I love Fall with all it's bright colors and cool crisp wind! Your poem is just perfect!

Voting up and everything......

Beautifully expressed enjoyed reading. Voted up!

Very nicely crafted poetry!

Ruby, I can see the leaves on the ground. Beautiful piece of works.

Incredible and the song makes this perfect

Wow... What a lovely poetry. Voted up.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful Ruby. I've always loved the fall and falling leaves. Autumn came a little later this year. As we speak, I'm watching the snow fall:) Not to many left, but certainly my favorite time of the year. LOL, enjoyed:)

I don't remember you writing poestry when you first arrived, but whether this is a new skill or one I just missed, it is excellent. I love the "Repetition please" line.

Your lovely poetry, Ruby, relaxes like a vacation.

Add Andy Williams and I'm excited with elation.

Ruby, you have a gift, both talented and refreshing. Great looking yard. Hope you are settled in and can now again turn to entertaining all of your fans!

Click, click, those Ruby slippers.

i hit all the buttons! Adorable dittie/s dear!

Smiling and sharingxx

This was beautiful Ruby, I walked through the small park the other day, and didn't care that I was kicking up the leaves! lol!

Oh, and the lovely crunch and autumn smell when we shuffle among those leaves! Lovely little poem.

This happens to me every year if I am patient enough, and the leaves blow far enough away down the hill that no one knows where they came from. I enjoyed your poem very much.

We had a big wind storm two days ago; no leaves to be found anymore. Winter is unofficially upon us. :) Beautiful, Ruby!

Beautifully written, Ruby and perfectly timed for the season falling around us. Raking leaves brings back such wonderful memories of childhood - jumping into the pile once raked, then starting over. I'm listening to the Andy Williams number right now. Oh how I miss those deeply sweet and romantic songs with his comforting voice.

Ruby, this is beautiful! I especially love the “repetition please.” Hugs. Voted way up, and shared. :-)