Senryu poetry, falling leaves

I'm falling in love with you and your poetry, Ruby...never leave us again!

Ruby, this is beautiful! I especially love the “repetition please.” Hugs. Voted way up, and shared. :-)

Beautifully written, Ruby and perfectly timed for the season falling around us. Raking leaves brings back such wonderful memories of childhood - jumping into the pile once raked, then starting over. I'm listening to the Andy Williams number right now. Oh how I miss those deeply sweet and romantic songs with his comforting voice.

We had a big wind storm two days ago; no leaves to be found anymore. Winter is unofficially upon us. :) Beautiful, Ruby!

This happens to me every year if I am patient enough, and the leaves blow far enough away down the hill that no one knows where they came from. I enjoyed your poem very much.

Oh, and the lovely crunch and autumn smell when we shuffle among those leaves! Lovely little poem.

This was beautiful Ruby, I walked through the small park the other day, and didn't care that I was kicking up the leaves! lol!

i hit all the buttons! Adorable dittie/s dear!

Smiling and sharingxx

Ruby, you have a gift, both talented and refreshing. Great looking yard. Hope you are settled in and can now again turn to entertaining all of your fans!

Click, click, those Ruby slippers.

Your lovely poetry, Ruby, relaxes like a vacation.

Add Andy Williams and I'm excited with elation.

I don't remember you writing poestry when you first arrived, but whether this is a new skill or one I just missed, it is excellent. I love the "Repetition please" line.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful Ruby. I've always loved the fall and falling leaves. Autumn came a little later this year. As we speak, I'm watching the snow fall:) Not to many left, but certainly my favorite time of the year. LOL, enjoyed:)

Wow... What a lovely poetry. Voted up.

Incredible and the song makes this perfect

Ruby, I can see the leaves on the ground. Beautiful piece of works.

Very nicely crafted poetry!

Beautifully expressed enjoyed reading. Voted up!

Beautiful, Ruby! I love Fall with all it's bright colors and cool crisp wind! Your poem is just perfect!

Voting up and everything......

Beautiful and perfect, Ruby. Thumbs up for you. Cheers :-)

This is beautiful! Such a lovely descriptive poem! I voted up, thanks for sharing!

Beautiful Senryu my friend. I could just see the fall sights in your words. You are a master of words.

One of my favorite subjects Ruby--these are really beautiful!

Beautifully written. I just raked all my leaves. Glad Spring is here.

Wonderful, refreshing and soothing too, like a balm of light.

Autumn says goodbye to summer and welcomes winter. A beautiful way to connect the seasons. The variety of stunning leaves falling from trees becomes one of nature's most beautiful shows.

Love your poetry Ruby. Votes up and sharing.

Audrey

Ruby, I've used this method of ridding my lawn of leaves on quite a few occasions. Very well done poetry.

I remember raking those mounds of leaves. It is a bit sad when the color fades and the winds blow the leaves away. Lovely poetry.

Fall is so inspiring when it comes to poetry. Nice job.